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person Selene
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, please keep writing this
person Jade Rider
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O You must...Write...THE SLASH! AHHHH! I will go insane. Please update this story soon. Maybe Lucius will let it happen once. He is very possessive over Hermione, so, yep. But man, I keep thinking about this story. I was talking with one of my friends, and I swear she is JUST like Ginny, and she kept yelling at me cause I was distracted. I need to write a story like this. *sighs* But I suck at writing. At least I think so. But anywho, I am in favor of the gloryness of slash in this fic. ^_^ Can't wait to see that little number "10" of chapters turn to a pretty "11." *sighs again and grabs a book to read*...I'll be waiting along with other readers! *wicked grin*

- Jade Rider
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
See, this is the trouble with stumbling upon a talented authoress, and devouring their stories whole like chocolate bars. I find myself incapable of not only coherent thought, but also unable to comment upon everything in the story I am reading that I liked. This has been a very lovely journey so far, the infallibly sexy Lucius, the blushing and naive Hermione, and Lucius' willingness to show her the ropes. I loved their first meeting, all their couplings afterwards of course. I love how Ginny is such a depraved over-sexed deviant little minx. Her suggestion to Lucius was both naughty and wonderful. I love how she is looking out for Hermione, and her drooling over Lucius' firm bod is funny. Her musings also, of Seamus and Dean using glamours was great. I loved the image I got of Lucius painting her toe nails pink, and Draco's fear of entering any room in his home without knocking loudly and shouting is downright pee-your-pants hilarious. I can picture him so clearly doing this and the look on his face as he does it. I found Hermione's descriptions of sex with Ron and Harry accurate in my mind. I can picture Ron as a horny, rutting type of lover, and Harry feeling so guilty that he wept afterwards. You know, I don't mind like Ginny in the fics that I read, but I find your Ginny charming and funny, and thank you for not placing her with Harry. I like her with Dean. And as for your waxing worried about losing your readers with the mild slash...don't worry. I myself, was a bit upset reading it, only because I knew it was a dream and not real. LOL. So you have a least *one* reader that wants to read about a Lucius/Hermione/Snape. ^.^ I cannot wait to read more, and I leave you now to skippy away happily to read the rest of your work.

XXOO
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person MegNutz
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please please continue this story! can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Hope you continue adding to it when your brain gets tired of other things.
The threesome would be great.
I like your Hermoine. Not too stupid and pathetic.
Thanks for writing.
person NashiraNeeko
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! :) Can't wait for an update
person lynn
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHH MY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think you have hit the jackpot here!!! The story is steamy and hot now BUT add Serverus and I think it will explode or at least Hermonie will. Please post the next chapter soon.
person Yes Mistress
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So hot. I've often imagined my husband and his friend like that, but it seems so much better in print....He's in for some good times tonight.
person Pyjama
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
do you still update this story?
I'd love to read some LM/HG/SS !!! :))))))
person CoCoM
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10

I do not know how I have gotten so out of touch with my beloved LM/HG fanfic of late but I am extremely excited to get caught up again!
I have loved this fic since you first began it and always look forward to updates. Seeing the relationship develop between them has been excellent.
This latest one was....uh...yes, VERY nice! I am totally up for a LM/HG/SS trio, in every sense. The slash was H.O.T. You have a talent for all things lemon-y!
Cannot wait for the next chapter!