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by soldiersgirl0709

person emo44
schedule November 15, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Seriously bummed this story wasn't finished. It was deliciously fun and funny.

Thanks for sharing this much.

I love your imagination. 

person Misskiwi
schedule February 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I love the sexual tension and affections between Lucius and Hermione. But honestly I think the threesome part goes too far, it's niether romantic or sensual since they already love each other and Hermione just expressed her strong possessiveness of Lucius (which is sooo hot) and Snape doesn't really fit in their already-built-up relationship. I was too depressed to read that chapter but other than that the smuts between Hermione and Lucius are wonderful. :) Thank you for the work. 

schedule December 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Loved this! 

schedule September 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Lovely! I wish sex was really that amazing LOL

schedule August 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I adore this story and you have very quickly become one of my favorite authors. Your work is the perfect balance of angst, comedy,  and romance;with wonderful smut included.  

person milapink
schedule May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I became fascinated by the story. Mainly hot sex between Lucius and Hermione. I laughed a lot with Lucius invading party girls
person jasmineboop
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories! Please, when are you going to finish this one or is it permanently abandoned?
person DB1
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is quickly becoming one of my favs!!! Wish that there was more snape Lucius and hermione goodness!!! If he's opening her up to different sexual experiences then a threesome would be a must!! And very good to read lol!! Please update soon!!!

DB
person sakka
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Harry Potter fic I've read. I *love* the pretense, and you can really write erotica! I take my hat off to you. I'm beyond impressed. -Sakka
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome!!! I just found it and love the orginality of it....