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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um. that first drabble with Patil and Draco was HOT...going to read the rest now : )
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fred, Hermione, George...was HOT..again..wow...I like how you ended that one...Hermione in control despite being shared. the way you described it was so mmmm.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww..the Pansy and Harry one was sad...I really liked it though, the description of their try at intimacy or something like it....It's a different way to paint Pansy. That one was really cool : )
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!! #4 HOURS....that was really excellent writing!!! I felt their longing, need, love, lust, and sadness. I feel so bad for Hermione but it was so sexy the way Harry took her and what he said. You really should expand on that one. Best one yet in this series..although they're all quite good.....I really loved that one though : )
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!@ Ch. 7 MONTHS....I'm so glad that wasn't their last time....please have them get together so they can continue : )) You write Harry/Hermione so well : )
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whooo! they keep getting better and better. I did like Luna's...it was sweet. And Ginny's was wonderfully tragic.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...Angelina with Flint...not sure I like it..but I like the way you tell a story : ) Do one with Angelina and Draco please : )
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow@ SEA. That was dark...and beautiful and tragic....loved it!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 10 that was DELICIOUS. Loved Pansy and Ron the way you described them, especially Ron as Pansy's "prey", her obsession, his inability to control his need, the ambiguity of whether he is involved with someone else, and his obvious disregard for that relationship even if he is....the descriptions of her wanting a piece of him...beautiful and hot : ) Please keep going..I truly hope you have 100 of these. I'll be commenting on all of them, or at least most of them...I know I didn't comment on your Luna/Neville and Luna and twins because those pairings just didn't do anything for me...but I'd love to see Luna with Draco, Harry, or Ron...maybe Lucius? Whatever..I'll keep reading whatever you continue to post because they're really packing a powerful punch : )