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by moirasfate

schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Sunrise. Luna and Hermione was HOT...what a way to take care of a friend who's fiance gets cold feet. I loved that you told it from Luna's odd quirky point of view. Not many people do her character justice but this was totally Luna with the weird rants and rationalizations. You really should do more femmeslash, that was excellent. Um, can I request to see the Luna/Neville bit where he takes her virginity? I'd love to hear what kind of wicked mouth Neville has on him. : )
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Sunset. WOW. I'm not really into Remus at all but that was really HOT! i love that he took her (and I'm going to insert Tonks here, not Hermione, although it could be her but I'd like to think it was Tonks) right before his transformation. That gave it a urgency and edge that made the sex that much more passionate. I loved that it had all of the markings of angry domineering sex but with none of the malice. Knowing that he'd love to mark her and his thoughts of her as a she-bitch made it that much sweeter. Really liked this one a lot : )
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Too Much. That was just.....damn. That one hit me kinda hard. I'm not sure why...maybe it's the thought of Harry causing destruction and being dark and hurting others. I'm not sure but did it mean that Hermione, Draco, and Charlie died by his hands or just had their own story to tell about how Harry had affected them? I want to know more about this one. It's really mysterious and sad. I think I'll PM about it, I hope you reply. I really like how you write Ron, it's respectful and sexy, although I notice you usually pair him with Pansy and not Hermione, except for that wonderful Trio story-that was so hot : ) I like your Pansy too, you have a great love of the characters that shines through in the depth and complexity you give them. I really really like this drabble and yet it's the one I least understand, go figure.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Not Enough. You never cease to surprise me. I LOVE the twist of a Slytherin Rose Weasley and a Gryffindor Scorpius lusthing after her. How cruel and ironic is fate? This really could be a full scale story....I want to know how he pursues her...loved the last line, and loved Lucius's advice to him.lol You're such a tease, what a start of what could have been a promising tale. OK, I'll let it go and resign myself to the fact that these are drabbles, damned good ones, but nothing else is to come of them.
person smmz79
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap there a little look into patil and malfoys relationship that was hinted at in the fool, the emperor and the hanged man... so malfoy could not finish well obviously it is time for him to move on.... next i believe i will continue on i like this
person smmz79
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice again... i am starting to really enjoy the twins with hermione in fics very nice
person smmz79
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woo chap three was interesting a little hidden romance that was ending nice
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! As always, I LOVE these drabbles. Another Draco/Hermione....one of my favorite ships....you do them very well. I loved this one because it felt so real, and you had everyone important in their life there with them. lol@ at a happy Lucius and Draco's fear of Hermione turning into Molly. Very cute. More please : )
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Enemies...OH SHIT! That was a twist in a half! Was not expecting that one at all....wow...please please do a full length story on that one. That was so kick azz...LOVED it! You have over 70 more to go, right? : )
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Friends!@!!!!! Kick ass Trio drabble. That was sad, beautiful and HOT! LOVED that one : ) I wish you would consider making a multi-chaptered story out of that one...actually, a lot of these could turn into lengthy fics. I know you're probably too busy but if you're considering it, I'd vote for Months, Respect, Sea, Black, White, Sorrow, and Friends to turn into full length fics...but really I wish they were all longer because they're all great : )