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by moirasfate

schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Touch...how sweet...something so innocent could make such an impression. I love the way you describe the tiniest of intimate moments. Excellent, although it makes me weep for Ced..RIP.
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Taste....now that was wild...I assume it has something to do with your new fic Damnation of Memory? Intriguing....Makes me wanna read it...I love the way you describe people and the way you described taste in this one actually made the sense come to life. I really wanna know more...
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Sight...Ah, aren't surprises wonderful. I love the image of a toned well defined Neville finally having the beauty on the outside to match the beauty within and Hermione being taken with it to the point where she can't refuse. Lovely recounting of a person's slow realization of interest in something more than friendship.
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
These are brilliant you are very very talented!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Sixth Sense. WHOAH! Brutal. Ginny and Tom/Voldemort is so underdone in ff IMO. This was perfect...and so hot, wrong, and twisted. I loved it. I wonder does he wind up killing in the act, it sounds like she was being truly impaled. Brilliant.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Smell....I really liked this...usually when you read about Greyback, he's seeking Harry as a mate, but this seemed more in character/canon. I loved the way you described his sense of smell and how he was appraising her based on that...it was very sensual...awww, I think he was almost in love there. Good thing Dean showed up : )
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sound! OMG. That was just...wow. Hermione/Charlie, not a pair I usually see, but I was totally digging it. I like the use of Muggle music here to allude to...something. I'm not sure what, but I'm sure it has something to do with your WIP. Which makes me wanna read it. It reminded me a lot of 28 Days....I love horror and the idea that they were surrounded by Inferi and were the only ones left was really cool.
person smmz79
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chap 4 was fabulous that HAS to be a story!!!! loved it!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
months.... well i was hoping you would tease us with another glimpse into harry and hermione...... loved it... obviously harry is not over hermione...
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Death. OMG!!! That was heartbreaking and beautiful. I love Cedric in that role. Oh damn you, I want more of that one. Wonderful as always, I could feel her fear and sense his longing...my heart hurts. I can't believe you've updated 5 of these suckers in one update, lucky me...off to read the next.