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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great chapter... I was curious when you were going to bring in draco and aera's relationship... I like how he is defferent around her when others are not there like he can be himself around her and in public he has to put up an image... also I like how subtle you were a lot of stories would already have them snogging.... I like this chap alot
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first off I have not read one word of your story yet bc I wanted to tell you that I have been looking for a story with this premise... Harrys secret twin sister returns and feelings develop with draco ok so with that said I am going to start reading!!!!!
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so I really like this so far, your writing flows very nicely! I like the route you have taken with this story making her a little rough with albus but yet the desire to help harry I cannot wait to move on great job so far:)
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok chap. 2 done... i love it, poor aera having to play friends with phlegm... ohhh but I love the snide commetnts back and forth from them two in french and you can see the hesitation from harry and his friends but their usual willingness to see the good in others come through... I can not wait to see the interaction between harry and aera more
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wooo anyone have a fan is it hot in here to you......
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a great chap, although small it was full of info. I love the relationship that harry and aera is developing you can see the connection between them, i hope that he still holds that trust when he finds out her secret
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am eager to hear more from this story, it's well written thus far