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for Smile Like You Mean It

by AeraVale

person shaki-em13
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your Snape. As for Sirius - I don
person smmz79
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok soooo not far i think i am going to explode if you do not post.... very good though... i loved blaise and dracos interaction you could see how draco is trying to hide his interest in aera by making it seem for knowledge only... also ginny is so funny i loved her response to aera and blaise kissing.... also wow hermione well although i am a fan of hermione fics i would have to say she had that coming from the beginning really..... and great job with sirius being aeras rock.... ok well since you must not post for a while you will be missed... and hurry up :)
person smmz79
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chap... i was wondering if blaise was going to come into play soon... and o did he ever.... very nice i wonder what draco will say once he finds out of the possible interest.... very good i look forward to more
person shaki-em13
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A quite interesting chapter. Snape was really amusing and Blaise's cool (though kind of too much mentioning of 'italian')
person KShe
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the BEST HPfic i've read in a very long time, i'm extremely addicted to it.

I cannot wait until you update, i'm on the edge of my seat.
person shaki-em13
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story so far, the best Draco-OC fic I've read. The latest chapter's really cool, I really like that Aera told Ginny first of all. And Harry probably wouldn't be so fond of his idea to convert someone if he knew it could end up with his sister coming together with Malfoy.
person smmz79
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yep i like it that was nice and a great way to ease some tension between the girls.... there is still hermione but i think harry took care of that... ohhh and having their own spy that is a great idea..... maybe draco I do not know but that sounds good.... hurry up and review again love it....
person smmz79
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a great chap. I knew hermione would be the one to quiz aera... and the truth potion idea wow i am not sure that is a good one on her part BUT it will ensure that they will believe her also great job with draco and his thoughts.... also his insight on aera was great as well noticing that she had secrets like him I wonder what his secrets are... also a question are you going to write in aera finding out what draco saw i am very curious..... please keep going and i look forward to another
person smmz79
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a full chap.... love the scene with draco you were able to make it very hot with minimal smut very nice.... also the conversation with hermione and harry very good and perfect we were able to see that some are trusting of her while others are cautious..... cannot wait for another chap
person smmz79
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally liked this chap... I am sooo curious as to what draco and hermione saw.... very good I can not wait for everyone to find out about her I wonder how they will feel... and another meeting with draco sounds interesting