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for Smile Like You Mean It

by AeraVale

person Anon
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story of Blaise and Draco is really interesting even if it's a bit scary (11 year old Draco killing a man). The end of Draco and Aera's conversation was great as all their interactions and I can't get enough of them. It will be good though if you bring more of Ginny (maybe some Ginny-Harry stuff) and Snape too.
person shaki-em13
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last review's from me - just forgot to write the name
person smmz79
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow ok so after i finished the chap i just sat here and stared at the screen what a deep chap... welcome back muse!!!! ok so she did not reveal much more to draco which is good they need to lay some more foundation to this relationship but what a great start... and oh my the history on draco and blaise.... wow... as you have eluded to in the beginning there is definetly more to draco... and the relationship tha the has with blaise is a very deep one... i think aera backing off of the seduction is a great idea i mean harry wants a spy on the inside i am sure that he will get that but without being sneaky.... great job i look forward to seeing where these characters take us in the upcoming chap....
person smmz79
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaahhh i am doing a happy dance... what a great chap i love the twist that had draco meeting aera instead of blaise... ok sooo very good ?on his part and yeahhhh that is what i have been dying to know what he had saw in the mirror but i think it is safe to say that he has left some important details out like she has... oh and a cliffie i hate cliffhangers.... i wonder where you are going to go next.... i actually hope she trusts draco and confides in him i think that will form a bond between them but i think she will have to talk to him more maybe through these questions????
person shaki-em13
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great chapter - definitely worth the waiting. Really cool how Aera tricked Blaise into telling her so much about himself and now he
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Please add me to your e-mail alert list so i can read the next updates! great job!
person smmz79
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHHHH happy dance.... ok so welcome back.... oh and congrats on the kitty i love animals... ok so totally love this chap and i 'think' i may know where you are going BUT i am probably wrong... ok so seducing blaise hmm i bet she could... but isn't he trying to seduce her for info??? ok and i was giggling when i read about the bet from ron... i bet she could too but i wonder what she will do to win the poof thing has been putting up with an all girl school and we know hoe they can be...
person shaki-em13
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's really amusing so far - Blaise trying to seduce Aera to find out more about her and she trying the same to find out about Voldemort's plans. Only minus the chapter's a bit short.
person smmz79
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
JUNE 7th really .... hum..... looking around wondering when you are going to come back....sigh.... ok ok i know you said the 9th fine.... i will be patient !!!! just wanted to let you know that you are missed
person smmz79
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so it is june 3rd...... yep time is going wayyyyy to slow.... hope you are safe where ever you are while we are all sitting here dying with anticipation.... ok ok fine hope you are having a good time... look forward to your update... you are an awesome author thanks