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for Not a Happy Beginning

by Ladyroo88

schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter, and very original prophecy!!!

but when will arrive harry's mate?
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it, update soon please
Harry should NOT forgive Sirius
person dino1
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that Black was manipulated by the headmaster so he shouldn't be punished.
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!! hope harry get back at rom/hermoine for their betrayl
person sanda
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
person dino1
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. I hop Harry Gets revenge on those who betrayed him.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello !

Very good first chapter... But is it "centaur" or"centuar" in the summary?
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the story is good, i cannot wait to see harry mate with a crestuar( excuse my spellin) i hope he get his revenge on dumbledore, ron/hermoine, and ginny