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for Not a Happy Beginning

by Ladyroo88

person Madhater
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this looks interesting i look forward to seeing what happens next. update soon ! ^_^
person alma
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start.
person alma
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. It's a good thing that Harry has Severus's Friendship.
person alma
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start, please update again soon.
person LiL L
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it and hope u update soon.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is totally diferent from what I thought people might write, when I posted the challenge! But I must admitt that I really like it so far. And I can't wait to see how you work in Firenze and their future child (or chidren). I hope you update soon! (-;
person sanda
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. Though part of me is mad about what Sirius did, another part of me still want him to care about Harry, so I'm gonna do with the second.
person LilCas
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Please keep writing I Like Me Like !!!!!