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They finally let all the pent-upsexual tension desolve! YAY! ^^.
Very good chapter, with excellent and lusty descriptions about their love making. I enjoyed everything very very much.

YES write a veela story. i would so love one. there haven't been many made that i really like but i think that you could make a nice one. i think i would like the apperance of a dark draco but make it a happy ending please if you can. i love this chp. yes finally some more smut. i can't wait to see how much more this story develops. i look forward to another chp. Draco buying baby clothes, love it

I am loving this story and so excited to see how soon you updated. I'm such a sucker for stories like this, keep up the good work!

As for your veela fic, I think you should go for the fluff. I love fluff!

OH yay!!! A chapter full of smut!! Nice.... I love how it was fluffy smut, and that Draco was likely looking at her the "queer expression" was like his love baldly stamped on his face. Lovely chapter!! As for the veela fic; I'd like to see Draco be a bit of both fluffy and dark. I believe that really encompasses who Draco is, very nicely.

You updated pretty quickly, I'm proud of you!
Loved the chapter, absolutely incredible!
As for the veela fic, while I do agree with Amaya, a dark Draco with a happy ending, I'm positive you will do justice to whichever one you choose to write.

Beautiful chapter xxxxx 10/10

Wow and update so soon. Great job finally getting them to where they should be. I am looking forward to the rest of the group finding out. I am just wondering who the angry party will be. I know that the group is civil to Draco but, being the father of Hermiones baby is something different all together. As to your veela question I thiink a Dark Draco is great however I would like him to be tender when it comes to his mate. I really like that combo although that tends to be the way veelas are in general. I just don't want him to be an ass. They do that to him so often it gets a bit tedious. Through the books it is clear that he is not that bad deep down but, he's not an angel either. I think as the author you should choose I'll read it either way as you are quite a good writer. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!

Love it! Great plots! Great characters! Great EVERYTHING! Update soon!

Oh yes, please write veela fic, I love them! I think a dark veela fic would be more exciting, not to mention, there's not many dark veela fic out there. I do hope the pairing is still draco/hermione though!

~DK

As a well-known sucker for happy endings (I have been known to refuse to read books or see movies without first being guaranteed a happy ending) I would love a fluffy-ending Veela fic, but come on. Dark, dominant, do-as-I-say-and-like-it Draco is way too much fun, especially in Veela form. DO IT!!! BTW, love this story and I can't wait for more interaction between these two and their friends. Also looking forward to the baby and the new dynamic that will bring. Keep it up!

Yeah, love this chap soooooo much! Make me wanna..ride...too! :P

Well, i love Veela fic and maybe fluffy plus a bit dark Veela, eh? can it be possible? lol Anyway I LOVE all veela :P