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for We Can Work It Out

by Gryffindorclutz

schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco...to have that doctor insinuate that he was infertile...lol. this chapter definitely made me smile! looking forward to more!
person luvhp
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noo, no Plan B! You have a pureblooded, gorgeous, witty, smart, delectable donor right in front of YOU!!

Loving this!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Poor Hermione! I wonder why she didn't check out fertility clinics in the States. I would assume that there would be a lot of them. Good chapter. I'm definitely hooked on this story.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So is Hermione's attempt to have a child going to hit the tabloids? Draco called her Granger in the waiting room, and you only mentioned disillusionment charms. That'd be amusing--Draco's the most likely suspect, so he'd be annoyed that everyone thinks he's shooting blanks, and doubly annoyed because it'd be much harder for him to pick up chicks at a bar.

The doctor's stance does make sense, even if he made some very rude and presumptive statements. She hasn't actually tried to conceive with anyone's sperm yet, and his supply of donor sperm is limited. Hermione's response was very . . . Hermione.

Draco's annoyance with the nurse and the uterus pamphlet was quite amusing.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. Then again, these infertile couples get the luxury of an anonymous donor, instead of having to ask friends for sperm donations. Then there's custody issues if the sperm donor ever changed his mind. Although that could happen with anonymous donations too, I suppose. Complicated.

btw, I like that she did have sexual chemistry with Ron AND she got along with him well. Usually if they break up it's only one or the other, or neither.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great little story! I'm thoroughly enjoying the light-hearted banter between Draco and Hermione, and chuckling over Draco's disgruntlement with Christine Dover referring to him as "Dad" ("I don't care. Ask your mother."), lol.
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! This is a very original story and I'm really enjoying it. You have made it actually very believable... her wanting a baby and all. I'm looking forward to an update dear. :D
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter. Draco seems to be getting annoyed with Hermione's idea more and more, hopefully he'll realize he's prefect for her. :) I can't wait for more.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grabs Draco 'n Hermione and sends them Flooing to an eye doctor for glasses to see each other clerly with*
LOVE it so far!!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, I can just feel the tension in the air: Draco won't find anyone worthy, or he'll put a little of 'himself' in there, anonymously, and they'll end up together and preggers, yeah? :D

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