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for New Beginnings

by AshaVincent

schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GE; *awesomely beautiful* chapter. Really good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!
person Jaynie
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that whole chapter was incredible. You really showed how in love Hermione and Draco were not just through their words but through their actions as well. I love this story, I've always been a sucker for fluffy stories. I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work.
person kazfeist
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job on the research! My husband is an OB/Gyn, and he's worked in all sorts of birthing situations. Our little town here doesn't have a doula, though the Mennonite population here does use midwives almost exclusively. My husband did do an emergency cesarean delivery (at the hospital) for a Mennonite lady, though. :D Many forward-thinking hospitals have jacuzzi and water-birth areas. The only caveat I would have with a home birth is that the situation can turn to dangerous in an instant, and that is why 'mainstream' medical thinking prefers the setting of a hospital, so that the baby can be delivered by emergency C-section if needed. We've certainly come a long way from the fifties, when women were basically completely sedated, and totally unaware of what went on during birth! It's wonderful that your Draco and Hermione are so emotionally connected with each other that a water birth worked so well for them. Thanks for a beautiful depiction of one of life's best miracles. :D
person smmz79
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a powerful chap... great job with the birth i do not think that i have ever read it done like that... i love how you wrote draco and hermiones relationship and connection... great job... and that he showed her that he still desired her... very good... i am just starting n your story behind closed doors and i like that a lot as well great job
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot get tired of saying this....... This is so cute. This Draco is simply the dreaming husband that all of us will want. Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cannot get tired of saying this....... This is so cute. This Draco is simply the dreaming husband that all of us will want. Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
person ace
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think you should bring them back into the magical world and have everyone realize that they got married
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorites fics. He is just so yummy and sweet. AHHHH I cannot get enought of him he is the dream prince that all of us girl dream to have someday. Also this fic I will let boyfriends and husband read it they could learn a little from it.. LOL LOurdes
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome!
person smmz79
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh an update.. i am sooo happy that it is up!!!! ok great chap.. i loved the part where draco was like... 'she can drive me to the firewhiskey' that was funny... i still love the way that you write their relationship!!! very nice... great job i can not wait to read the next chap