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for New Beginnings

by AshaVincent

person smmz79
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a great chap.. i am sooo glad that you are back... i hate when RL becomes hectic but i am glad that you were able to get things sorted... ok this was a great chap and you gave us some more to harry i have been wondering what he was like if it was just hermione that he was a dick to or was he just like that in general... so lucius and hermione are working on a relationship i am interested in seeing what draco makes of everything that happened with his father and i wonder if hermione is going to tell him about harrys involvement in his fathers abscence during the last days of narcissas life... so only a few more chaps and i really can not wait for part two....
person Josie
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. I cant wait for the coming chapters!
person smmz79
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh you updated what a greatchap i love how connected hermione and draco are and that they are able to work so well together in their parental roles... love this chap and i can not wait for the next!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love happy stories. I know they've had their share of angst, but overall it's love, love and more love. Thank you.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter hon. I especially enjoyed the WWALS bit!!
person KellyJCR
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear that your ill but, thnk you for the update. This is one of my favorite stories and I was hoping that there would be more. I never reviewed the last chapter and I wanted to point out the fact that you made it very realistic. I couldn't have a water birth although I wanted one. From what you wrote it sounded like you had been part of the experience itself. I know alot of authors create "funny" birth scenes (screaming obscenities, breaking hands, etc.) and that is not how it actually happens. I am sad to see the end of this one coming but I will be eagerly waiting for the next story you write. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an update in this story, even though your last chapter before this one would have ended the story beautifully. I hope your health issues will be positively resolved soon. And, I'm glad you thought of us readers in this time. I'll keep positive thoughts for you in mind. :D
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories ever... And knowing there is Part 2 just make me jump in hapiness.... As ever this chapter is very sweet and expected.... But I am intrigue of the 2nd part.. Care to give a previous? I hope that your health improves and that is nothing too serious..
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was beutifully done. All your research paid off. This is the best child birth description that I have ever encounter.. Bravo!!!!!! Please post soon and keep them coming we cannot wait on what is coming next!
person Citten
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so presiuos! :) now we still have lots more to combate dont we family and the wizarding world. they were so cute and wonderful to each other you did a great job! :) i look forward to the next chapter!