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for New Beginnings

by AshaVincent

schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness I love this story! Great update! And OMG it's rare for me to dislike Harry, but you've managed to make him so unlikeable. I hope there's more, I love the relationship you've established between Hermione and Draco. I look forward to reading more. :)
person SnapesCello
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It may 'FLUFF' as you say but I still love it, the way you write enables the reader to feel the emotions of the characters so intimately. You have become my favourite writer on here. I can't wait to read more
person kazfeist
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely effort. A couple typos, and sometimes you got confused with the verb tenses, but I love the emotion of both of them. If this is the last of the chapters, you could actually have lenghtened it by another paragraph or two, sort of winding it all up. ;D
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really, really good! I cannot believe you haven't gotten more reviews! I think you've written Draco and Hermione quite lovely here. I hope you're planning on writing more. I'd love to see where this relationship is headed for Draco & Hermione. :)