rate_review Reviews

Pros: lots of lemons

Lots of romance

Plot

Technically complete

Cons: plot with evil Harry is just getting started when it ends and the part 2 the author promised was never written

Sometimes switches tenses back and forth

Alt med, reiki, home birth BS

Long winded

Wonderful, fascinating story! I loved the whole finding each other in the muggle world bit, as well as their lives there. The passion was just so intense and although fast it was displayed quite believably.

I'm not a fan of Harry being a bad guy... it's really hard after the canon books being from his perspective. Although he definitely had his 'git' moments it's rather hard to take his treatment of Hermione believably even though you wrote it quite well. I just had trouble getting past the canon on that one.

Otherwise I loved just about everything in this. Minerva is spectacular. Perhaps in the sequel the Malfoys can get Luna and Neville on their side? I can see it working, and helping out immensely. Blaise and Blythe are awesome but in fighting or at least standing up to your evil!Harry the more supporters they have the better.

Thanks for not having Ginny in on the evil too. What about the rest of the Weasleys? Arthur certainly seems to be his sweet self -at least from Draco's short tale of him.

Thanks so much for writing!

Such a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks so much for sharing it.

I have just finish re-reading this wonderful story for the 3rd time.
I am really sorry to hear about your mother and understand you feel like it will not do you wrting any justice if you continue.. I just hope you can come to terms with it and get back to your writing. Please do not think me to be cold hearted but if writing is what makes you happy, then maybe it will help
you. I have also read your other stories a few times over. I really hope you come back and write part two to this story soon. blessed be

Fabulous job. Loved it. I hope you still plan on a sequel cause I can't wait for it

Ok, love this story have read like five times. So what I want to know is when is the sequel gonna be up?

I love this story...I keep coming back to read it again and again ! :)
Looking forward to the next part

love the story cant wait for the sequel

Can't wait to read the sequel, i realy enjoyed reading this fic ... please please post Going Home

Love this story when are gonna post part 2.