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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome start.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!! I sooo need chapter 3!!!
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic! Can't wait to see where you take this.
But a word of Advice...
I don't know if you already have one, but you might want to consider getting a Beta to read over your chapter before you post it,just to correct any spelling or grammar mistakes.
If you like, I offer my services as a beta.
Otherwise Marvelous Fic. Looking forward to the next Chapter.
But a word of Advice...
I don't know if you already have one, but you might want to consider getting a Beta to read over your chapter before you post it,just to correct any spelling or grammar mistakes.
If you like, I offer my services as a beta.
Otherwise Marvelous Fic. Looking forward to the next Chapter.
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I like the orb room, thingy, very interesting. Much better then having to explain it all.
Looking foreward to reading the rest.
^_^
Looking foreward to reading the rest.
^_^
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept so far. A very believable situation for a father Sev.
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far a pretty goof story but it seem to me that your letting snape off really easy and as far as the lord vampire i think that it might be sir or sev himself but at last that would be cool but how would be sev partner any way good start up date soon
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vampire Harry?? Yum!!!
Looking forward to the next Chapter
Looking forward to the next Chapter
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 2!!! Sooo James is alive? Or is someone else Harry's father? Did he hang Lily?