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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading this story. I just wish that you'd allow someone to help you proofread it. Many of the errors I've caught wouldn't be there. They detract from the great story you have written. I truly like it. I'd be more than happy to help you with checking for grammar errors, misuse of words, and spelling errors. All in all, though I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy smoke! Neville is one of them! I sooo need chapter 11!! What did Harry mean? His link with Draco is weakening?
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope you're okay!!!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope everything turns out ok for you, don't worry about a new chapter till whatever is wrong is fixed
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Take your time and heal.
Hope you feel better!
Hope you feel better!
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I say wow!
I truly love this story!, I have never seem one like it.
I truly love this story!, I have never seem one like it.
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Sirius is still in the secret part of the infirmary because of what you mad friend did, he could have died that night if it wasn
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sooo need chapter 10!!!!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. i know harrys all good and the "chosen one" and all but damn it sucks to be him with all he has to do. liked what hermione did at the end there
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9!!! Did the mermaid just lure him in?