rate_review Reviews

This one-shot is very descriptive, allowing us to 'see' through the eyes of the characters, especially Draco. He's obviously not a virgin, the way he is cataloging Hermione's assets. Having them each wanting the other and only touching themselves is a hot twist.

I guess Hermione hadn't availed herself of her own hand before? She's certainly going to get a thorough lesson from Draco, who seems to know exactly what he's doing. He sounds pretty sophisticated. Delayed gratification in a teen boy qualifies for VERY sophisticated. I wonder who he learned his style from?

The 'plot' was simple but very effective and the writing brought me right into their secret, unexpected assignation. Hermione was lucky to get someone experienced for her first orgasm. Great job!

so hot and passion, love it. =D

That was amazing! more please? please?! :D

I know you said it's going to be a one shot but how much would I have to suck up to you to extend it a bit further til Draco and Hermione get their groove on?...LOL

It really was a fine peice of work and left me wanting for more....please please please add to it! (I'll bake you cookies...lol)