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September 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love how detailed you are, it allows our naughty minds to paint a full picture in our heads!! Thanks! Cheers!!!;-)
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh I am such a fan and this fic was just so hott, and erotic, it would have kool if you could have posted more oneshots with them, it was definately worth the read.
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I really liked this. I like it as a one-shot, but I would love to see it developed into a full story if you felt the urge. Great writing!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is most definitely one of the more erotic, f**king hot D/Hr stories that I've read in a VERY long time! Freaking brilliant--I love it!
;~D
;~D
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, i thought it was good, although you should write about the big c, you know big c**k, lol. I would love that. Thanks for the review.
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! I can see you doing a sequel, though, or maybe even a three-chapter story: how she reciprocates for Draco, how he enjoys her with his mouth, and how they, finally do the deed. :D
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! If only us girls could be so lucky to have such a sexy wizard help us out that first time ;)
So, delicious. I know it's a one-shot, but maybe later she could repay him for his selflessness.
So, delicious. I know it's a one-shot, but maybe later she could repay him for his selflessness.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello, i just want to tell u i like it so much and i hope you
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very delish!!! Any chance of a sequel so 'Mione can return the favour? Please!!! :)
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you sure that you want to keep it as a oneshot? i like it really very much and think there could be written a lovely second chap by a nice author (you *g*)...