rate_review Reviews

Very nice!!!

i loved it!

this was well-written, especially in terms of plot. the progress of the story was realistic and the incorporation of canon facts was nicely done. i like the way harry's relationship with lily was written. leaving certain aspects of their conflicted relationship unresolved gave credibility to the interaction of their characters. i like harry's firm resolve, assertive character and emotional side. i love draco's naive, innocent, virginal but fiery character. the progress of harry and draco's romantic relations was amusing, emotional and tackled points of conflict that i think the real draco and harry would have faced and would have taken into consideration (some fics portray harry, in this case draco, as not giving a damn about his golden boy image to pursue romantic relations). the humorous parts of the story were well placed. very nice AU. although personally, some points, like giving draco glasses, pushed it a bit too far i think. moreover, i know this is a oneshot, but it think you could have explored the characters and their portrayals more, especially with how you described harry and draco in your summary. these are of course just personal thoughts. ;)