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GAHHHH you updte a chapter and I never knew. I am a bad faithful reviewer, or just a busy busy one. *sigh*

Chapter 42:

I really liked this. It played more into everyone's 'aftermath'. It was great. Leaves room for a lot of development with all characters.
Roddy and Bella are sweet in their own dysfunctional kind of way.

Okay I'm off to read the next chapter.

Awww, poor Ruby, YAY! Ron! Awww, Yay Hermione/Draco! Whooo! Most articulate review ever!

Poor Ruby, the poor baby! I just want to hug her and hug her and make all the bad stuff go away. Good for Ron. That was a very sweet and tender moment even if only Ron and the readers were privy to it.

I was hoping to hear a bit from Roddy and Bella, but they need their rest. That was a battle that almost took everything away from them, I understand their time away. Hopefully soon they will make a small appearance.
I like Lucius more and more as this story goes on, I've liked him from the beginning, but my love for him grows with each passing chapter with him in it. The fact that the actor who portrays him in the movies is very good looking just lets my love for Lucius grow as I picture him within this story. haha

I am slightly disappointed in the proposal. Not because I didn't enjoy it, because in fact I think that bit was perfect. It was exactly something Draco would say and Hermione would answer. BUT this is a Dramione fic and I feel sometimes when a big moment occurs between them you focus on someone else more within the chapter and leave them a little blurb. I know there are a lot of mini stories within this story but again I say Dramione fic. So I was really looking forward to some more build up, more than just a little ending to this and their engaged. A ring perhaps. Some chickening out, maybe a cute little talk with the old man, where Lucius finally gives him his blessing. Just something more. Only because, and you know I love all characters, ut I feel you focus on them more than you do what you deemed the main pairing in this story. I don't know maybe it's me, and lord knows as well as you I can be picky(I'm sorry I try not to) but I just saw it that way, and Ive noticed that happen, their not getting their time on page. And they're the stars. lol

I like it though. It was a great chapter. And I did like the proposal so don't get me wrong. I thought it was perfect just short.

Till next time, and I'm sorry I missed the previous chapter, work has kept me, and my own writing has kept me. I promise to be better!! haha b/c I loved the last chapter and you need the love to know that there is love. So I shall send you love and try to be more on top of my game. lol

dM

p.s. Thank you for your review on my story =D

AWWWW a lot of weddings yay!! but i have an honest and very importat question WHERE THE HELL IS BELLA? I missed here :( well I love the Chap. and I sincerely wish my dear prince and the cute 4 eyes end up together, becasue then I will have my dear doggie all by myself while they are busy trying to perfect the master move of Sirius Black Lol well as always I love it, update soon

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Cute!

yeah.... ~jumping up and down in excitement~ woo hoo they are engaged... and i know what you mean about the tv shows i turn on tv land am like hey i grew up with the cosbys...... i am not old... damn you tv land :)

I had a hard time reviewing last chapter and this one, mainly because no matter how angry Rodolphus is, he doesn't need to hit Bella. If he truly loves her, he wouldn't. Psychologically, at the end of a cataclysmic battle like that, he'd more likely be thrilled that they had both survived relatively unscathed. Yes, he'd be angry that Bella fought while pregnant and that is perfectly understandable...but I think it's the same kind of anger a parent experiences when their child does something they're not supposed to and either gets hurt or almost gets hurt. They're angry at the child for disobeying, but at the same time so relieved that the kid is okay that the anger is at least temporarily forgotten.

They're your characters to play with, though, so obviously you write them as you see fit. I just can't get on board with that particular aspect of things. I think Rodolphus at the least should have gotten a stern talking to, either from Lucius or some other male who knows how to respect his wife. Everyone was busy and tired and emotions were running high, but I feel like someone should have stuck up for Bella. I'm just not thrilled that everyone there did nothing about it, because it was a rather public scene. And right after he was given a second chance at life! He should have seen Bella's admission as something of a miracle, his reason for being, but instead all he can do is wallop her? Not cool.

I'm glad everyone is all right, though. And cute interlude with Fred and George. Looking forward to the way things wrap up. :)

whohoo.. lol
i soo loved this chappy, and good for you for scolding him :-)
bloody brilliant!!! if there was a feature to put favorite stories on this sie then this story would be #1. you rock!!!!

loved the chap... can not wait for your next... wonderful job as always... and about i love lucy i am actually from the US so that is one of the reasons i got the connection that an i have a family member that is addicted to i love lucy

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