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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like as always. But I was hoping for a little more Hermione/Draco.
YAY Draco for pummeling the arsehole that is Ron. But Boo for no stuff going on with Hermione and Draco.
Tell your muse to get her ass back here and help you finish the story or I shall hurt her. Kay thanks lol.
YAY Draco for pummeling the arsehole that is Ron. But Boo for no stuff going on with Hermione and Draco.
Tell your muse to get her ass back here and help you finish the story or I shall hurt her. Kay thanks lol.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!!! I have been laughing the entire time and I can't believe you introduced Bella to SpongeBob! It was written beautifully and please don't leave us hangin'.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 9..more soon please xxxx
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah happy dance you updated... ok for your ?'s Ruby rocks i do love her and i think she is totally believable... I like all of the other charactors well you are doing a great job with their personalities.... lucius definetly has a nice ass.... oh and when draco hermione pairings are involved i am a ron downer as well....... great job please update again soon
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes, ruby, someone most definitely should punch him in the face!!!!!!!
hermione maybe?? and after that draco takes a turn??? ;)
update soooon (and give us some more draco/hermione moments.. i just love the ones u write)
xx
hermione maybe?? and after that draco takes a turn??? ;)
update soooon (and give us some more draco/hermione moments.. i just love the ones u write)
xx
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...a lot went down. Oh Bella will you ever learn when to keep your mouth shut.
Okay so feedback on your little american girl.
Sometimes I do whooping noises and a dance around her because she does some amazing things. Sometimes I think she's a fool. But as my mom says ' Fools are just quick-reacting intellects' so I can't really fault her for having a heart first and thinking about repercussions later now can I? I like this weird bond she's formed with Bella. Their personalities would suit a friendship. Bella's hard edge would definitely be softened by a take no nonsense "Yank". It suits very well. I must say nice job with the ending as well...it really showed the Order a completely different side to Bellatrix Lestrange. Which should put some of them a bit more at ease. Hopefully.
I roared with laughter over the 'and Malfoy just gave him the willies'. ahahahha oh Harry. I'm pretty sure I scared my fiance and cat when I burst into my random fit of giggles reading that ahaha.
Now I don't know if I like your Kingsley. He's not the Kingsley I've grown to know and adore. He was more emotional then he is reasonable. So maybe I'll have to get used to this new side of Kingsley.I think I can do it though. His emotions are after all understandable.
As for Sirius, you should have explained his reappearance before having him reappear. I was confused as to how he escaped the death of the veil? Also Dumbledore's reappearance.
And as my last note, seeing this is a Draco/Hermione story, I think I would have liked both Draco and Ruby coming to the aid of Hermione. And then of course Draco can kick himself later for defending a mudblood.
so yes thats all. I hope that this is what you wanted. Feedback. I thought it only fair to give you what you want in exchange for reading this wonderful story you've created.
tata for now.
p.s. I hate Ron. I hated him even in the HP books. His whiny temper annoys me. But the funny thing is. I love Rupert Grint. He brings a whole new side to Ron. weird huh?
Okay so feedback on your little american girl.
Sometimes I do whooping noises and a dance around her because she does some amazing things. Sometimes I think she's a fool. But as my mom says ' Fools are just quick-reacting intellects' so I can't really fault her for having a heart first and thinking about repercussions later now can I? I like this weird bond she's formed with Bella. Their personalities would suit a friendship. Bella's hard edge would definitely be softened by a take no nonsense "Yank". It suits very well. I must say nice job with the ending as well...it really showed the Order a completely different side to Bellatrix Lestrange. Which should put some of them a bit more at ease. Hopefully.
I roared with laughter over the 'and Malfoy just gave him the willies'. ahahahha oh Harry. I'm pretty sure I scared my fiance and cat when I burst into my random fit of giggles reading that ahaha.
Now I don't know if I like your Kingsley. He's not the Kingsley I've grown to know and adore. He was more emotional then he is reasonable. So maybe I'll have to get used to this new side of Kingsley.I think I can do it though. His emotions are after all understandable.
As for Sirius, you should have explained his reappearance before having him reappear. I was confused as to how he escaped the death of the veil? Also Dumbledore's reappearance.
And as my last note, seeing this is a Draco/Hermione story, I think I would have liked both Draco and Ruby coming to the aid of Hermione. And then of course Draco can kick himself later for defending a mudblood.
so yes thats all. I hope that this is what you wanted. Feedback. I thought it only fair to give you what you want in exchange for reading this wonderful story you've created.
tata for now.
p.s. I hate Ron. I hated him even in the HP books. His whiny temper annoys me. But the funny thing is. I love Rupert Grint. He brings a whole new side to Ron. weird huh?
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aahhh... I need more!
Update soon, I can't wait to read more.
I really like the plot so far, I also really like the humor. Very funny.
I can't wait until Hermione and Draco really realize that they like each other, that should be amusing.
Well, great work so far, I'll be looking forward to more.
Update soon, I can't wait to read more.
I really like the plot so far, I also really like the humor. Very funny.
I can't wait until Hermione and Draco really realize that they like each other, that should be amusing.
Well, great work so far, I'll be looking forward to more.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was hysteridal.... I LOVE BELLATRIX she is sooo funny just to picture the crazy death eater watching a childrens cartoon... oh my i am still laughing and setting the stove on fire that is great oh wow.... lucius hmmm nice it is good to see that he is not making an overnight change in his opinions but it is good to see that he is learning from his mistakes... and poor draco crying it is nice to see the affects of what happened at the end of the sixth book on him.... so draco has a litle something going for hermione huh nice let the games begin.... ok post soon please i cannot wait to see where you take this
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok this is nice and it is different... I love the fact that hermione writes love stories i think it is funny... and the name for voldie and harry that was cute... i also loved the little image of harry meeting voldie at the market... i love that you are using some humor very nice.... on to chap 2
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow nice chap.... of course take her to the burrow what a great way to help her become adjusted slightly.... i like this story and i hope that hermione and ruby become really close