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ok so i'm just now reading this story and im upset with my self that i waited so late to get into it because i absolutely love it. two points to draco though in this chapter. first of all he called molly a walking uterus lol hilarious and second he said that he doesnt like to receive only give...whoop whoop is all i can say go hermione finding a guy like that is what you want in life! great update

YAY!!! I loved this chapter. The flowers that Draco gave 'Mione were a nice touch, I wish my boyfriend would be sweet and romantic and bring me flowers! :D I'm not fond of Ron, either, so I like how everybody else seems to be willing to help the Malfoys and Bella and now Roddy. The scene with Bella talking to the unconscious Rodolphus was so sweet! Can't wait for more!

Okay so I really love what you've done with Roldophus. I think it was brilliant. I also think that Bella's new attitude is great. She still has her edge but we get to see her soft side. It's nice to know she has one.

I want to hear more from Lucius and Narcissa. especially on this whole Hermione/Draco matter. I think I would have had something go on there when Draco first came out with it. Because although Lucius owes her, I would have liked him to freak out a tiny bit before being put in his place by Ruby. Hermione, Narcissa, and Draco. It would be nice to see his uncomfortable side around Hermione. He may have betrayed the Dark Lord, but he's still Lucius Malfoy.

Also I want to hear more from Hermione and Draco and not just their kissing. These two are a power couple. And as great as their sexual relationship shall interest me throughout this story, you've made their relationship all about it. You need to show them united without their tongues down each others throats. I also want to see Hermione put Ron in his place. The Hermione we know would never sit back and let Ron pull what he does. She would be upset but she would stand up. Also it would have been good for her to go to that meeting. Show a united front between her new beau.

So yes. Don't stop your Roddy and Bella story, it's fabulous. And I ask for a bit more from Draco and Hermione as well as Lucius and NArcissa.

what a great chap and so full of goodies... i am glad that bella is going to give it a go with her hubby she deserves happiness, and that was a great part in the chap when she was reflecting very good... and it allowed us just one more glimpse into what bella is really like... rons comment int eh beginning about the house being a death eater half way house was funny.. i do like that you have him in the negative light i am not really a fan of his when hermione and draco are together.... oh and you tease leave us hanging now i am going to be sitting here anxiously waiting... oh well it will be worth it

Oh my god, I love this fic! Me, being American and all, I just love Ruby! She's very believable! Oh, and the Draco and Hermione -ness? Perfect! Thank you for not making them jump bones... Its much more realistic this way. Can't wait for more! I'm off to check out some of your other fics!

nice i do love bella and esp when you give her some depth to her character... great chap cannot wait to see where that little twist leads us

what are you talking about?!!!! That was marvolous!!!!!!(sp?)

Ch 14 - Ohh, that is an interesting twist. Please update again soon!

VERY NICE CHAPTER!! I loved every second of it haha, it's about time they got together ;)
Continue writing, I love Ruby (although I'm about as north as you can get in the USA other than Alaska haha), and if you let me borrow Draco I promise I'll return him much much later. ;)

Draco just likes to stir up trouble, doesn't he? Lol. Nice chapter, please update again soon! =)