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Ohhh ! Ruby! Please don't let Ruby get hurt! I want to be wrong, but this Tom guy has "bad news bears" written all over him! I've a sneaking suspicion he's Voldemort, or someone from the DE side... Please please let me be wrong, though!
On a happier note, I thought that Lucius' little trick with the TV and Roddy was too funny! Something I'd do, haha. :)

Holy shit.

Well you know what coming. LOVE the Roddy parts. Lucius is so juvenile it amuses me to no end. HE tries to be all big bad older Lucius, but he's just a little kid at heart. Even in the books. Such a sulker when things don't go his way.

O....M....G....Tom Riddle did not just transform himself and capture the heart of our dearest American. Her heart seemed to be all a flutter for the red-eyed stranger. Devious little snake he is. As long as Ruby isn't seriously injured, or goes bad, I'm more than happy to see where this goes.

Her comment on Draco with monopoly was interesting. Kind of scary though, since I've literally never lost a game in monopoly. I wonder what that says about me. I hope only that I'm ambitious.

I like the small exchange with Draco and Hermione, brought another part into their relationship however brief. I would like to see more interaction between the Mafloys and Hermione, see how Lucius's childish pureblood snit evolves. Watch him come around. I want a little more Harry thrown in too. Ron can just bugger off.

hahhahaha

OMG... ok first things first... lucius and narcissa watching tv that was great... him taking control of the remote while narcissa waited patiently so she could snatch the 'television wand'..... nice and i love bella she is sooo funny teaching him all of the things that she was amazed to learn... and roddy with the barking dog that was funny and lucius is a little bit of a prankster...
I had a funny feeling that voldie was going to take ruby when he was in the throne room... poor hermione she is going to be devastated.. well at least they have a load of deatheaters that can help with recovering her...

Uh oh...What is my man up to now?

this is pretty good so far, i hope you continue it..post more soon please.

Ok, first I have to apologize for not reading and reviewing sooner. You've got a another wonderful story here. (You may recall that i adored your story You Raise Me Up) I love Ruby, she is an honest, in your face, straight forawrd, kind of girl! Her sarcasm is funny as hell! I am happy that you have included Bella again in your story, you write a wonderful Bellatrix! I see Snape has made an appearance, not a large one, though i laughed when Bella called him 'Snape-a-doodle'. That was great =)! I like that you did not rush Draco and Hermoine and I enjoy the conflict between Draco and Lucius. Draco is learning to stand up for himself and Lucius is realizing that all he once believed in is nothing more that dust. Narcissa is pregnant? LOL, how will Draco react to the news of a new sibling? Rudolphus and Bella? I could see it. Especially as there really is very little information on their relationship. Great job!! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!\


Happy Writing!!!

LadyBlueEyes
xoxoxo

Your right I really did like that chapter. I thought it was great. I'm glad you did. It made me feel awfully special. I mean it just wouldn't be Lucius Malfoy without the little bit of pureblood attitude would it? haha.
I also like how Narcissa stood up but at the same time didn't make her husband feel cornered. Smart witch, that woman.

As for the next chapter. I love Bella and Roddy, don't change a thing about what you do with them. No suggestions there.

I would have liked to see All the Malfoys in the kitchen though and seen Rodolphus' reaction to it all being true. I'm sure it sputtering would have been amusing.

I just knew he lead that rebellion for her. And Bella is right, it's very romantic, in a sick and twisted sort of way *Love-Sigh*

I kind of also would have liked Hermioe to be there with Ruby, it would have been nice to see little Miss intermediate healer Hermione Granger, gush over Roddy's health. Could have been a bit amusing.

I really like it. My suggestions are nothing really, because you definitely don't need them.

Keep up the good work my darling. I can't wait to see how much this progresses.

Very nice chapter!

wow that has to be interesting waking up to see your dead wife and you are in the enemies lair..... i like how you have roddy and bellas relationship a litle uneasy at first but you can see why they are together... i thought it was hysterical when bella had to yell at him and drag him downstairs that was good and very funny i already see a little of his personality showing threw and i like it... he makes a nice companion to his nutso wife... oh and ruby is funny as ever i love her when she interacts with each one of your characters... she is very unique... and the nickname for ron and harry very fitting...

please update soon.