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Good Sweet Jesus Woman. That was a chapter to make all panties soaked and very male's member go stiff.

Holy Hell.

No Suggestions, no nothing. Who could make a suggestion on a fantabulous smut chapter. It's impossible.

I am highly excited to uh be meeting this Mr. R(I forgot his pretend last name) next chapter. I wonder if he'll wear sunglasses so Hermione doesn't see his eyes.

Oh and his reaction to Draco. Oh shit, now Draco's in danger. =( I never thought about that before.

Oooh! It's about time!!! Yay! Gooo 'Mione and Draco! Woo hoooo! (so, obviously, I really liked this chapter! You were right! :D )

Ch. 20 - Wow! Great chapter, although I'm slightly worried about Ruby. Please update again soon!

Hermione always was a worrier, but this time i feel her instincts are correct....and lucius' two knuts aren't worth anything...lol look what he put his son through! I like that Narcissa is comforting Hermione "mothers" need to stick together...=) well, i don;t like this Tom bloke. not at all. and poor Ruby allshe really wants is someone to love her for herself! Can't wait for more!!

Lady B
xoxo

Er, this Thomas character seems suspicious...I mean, who has RED eyes? The only person, if I can still can him human, is Voldemort. He sounds suspiciously like Tom Riddle and how she just lost track of time... Please update again soon!

hmmm. I like Hermione's protective side. It really shows the Hermione we have known through the books and loved. No need to remind you of S.P.E.W I'm sure.

I liked Lucius with Hermione, and Draco staying silent not knowing what to do was very believable.

It would have been nice though if when Narcissa held Hermione Lucius had have said something such as "Stop coddling the witch Narcissa, she's acting ridiculous" and then had Narcissa snap at him. A pregnant woman's hormones are not to be tested. hahaha

But I liked it as it was. Very realistic. Stupid Stupid Stupid Ruby showing Tom to Hermione's flat. *shakes fist at the american*

I hope to hear more from Harry, Roddy, Bella, and all the gang. hehehe

Can't wait for the next update.

Oh, good, I'm so glad Ruby is safe for now. Great chapter. I loved how Hermione yelled at Lucius, too funny. More, please! :)

lucius should really get smacked upside his head lol

wow what a chap... i thought for sure that voldie was going to take her... but it seems he may be trying to get her trust to get info or maybe to be allowed in to the order.... ok and poor hermione i am sure lucius just wanted to tie her to the couch... i noticed that 'tom' slipped at dinner.. he made the comment 'how slytherin of you..' then when she asked what house he was in he said he went to durmstrang(sp?) how would he know that her comment was 'slytherin' is he was not familiar with their code of conduct??? ok so great chap i caught on to the comment she made when hermione and draco were playing monopoly but i wonder what is going to happen that he needs to be careful about his actions?? anyway great chap

Roddy's reaction to the TV was great, and Lucius will always be Lucius whether he is on the light side or the dark side...he truly does enjoy messing with people's heads. I wonder if he will impart Narcissa's info about Bella being a closet submissive to Roddy?

I love monopoly!! However i try to play like Draco and buy up whatever property i land on, yet i still manage to lose! Think Draco could come over and show me a few things ;-)

And we have Ruby walking off with a Thomas Rohan? I don't have a good feeling about this! My gut instincts tell me she should have told Hermione first! I don't think i will like this Mr. Rohan who obviously knows Hermione but will not let her cousin go and tell her where she will be.

Have you seen the movie Juno? Your sense of humor and style of writing reminds me of the character Juno in that movie...if you haven't seen it I highly recommend it, its brilliant!!!

Great Update and I am soooo looking forward to more!

Lady B
xoxoxo