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for Upside Down

by Kooldragon400

person smmz79
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what another great chap and omg what a fantastic love scene between roddy and bella..... lucius is just like a girl he has to meddle in everything but of course this was for the greater good... :) i think roddy really showed bella what was up esp in his death eater garb oh my at the end he had me wanting to say that i was his... bella finally got her dominating husband thats good for her... poor ruby i knew it when the waiter came up and she noticed his clothing what was happening also by the way that he greeted them... i absolutely loved her reaction way to go ruby do not give him the satisfaction.. he wanted her to scream but she did not and she even threw some sarcasm in there... so i wonder what is going to happen now i look forward to your update... i am sorry you did not get many reviews last chap but it was a great chap all in all i loved it...
person allie
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. she couldnt have said it better. update soon
person mlui
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious, didn't Hermone describe how Voldemort looked like? I think alarm bells should have gone off with the Death Eater robes, but then again, she's too enamoured with Tom to notice, I guess. I hope she left the note (that came along with the flowers) so Hermione can track her down or have a sense of where she was...
person Amaya
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yes i guessed right!! i loved Ruby's reaction it was so like her. Bella's scene was hot. :)
person ucdevil
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg!
Way to go Ruby!
AHAHAHAHA darling please update!!!

I just love Ruby's attitude.
Why is Voldy doing messing with underage girls???

I hope you clear the air!
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roddy and Bella were hot! its about time he stepped up to the plate in the bedroom...lol. Oh Ruby...whatever have you gotten yourself into now? I can't imagine how frantic poor hermione will be when she finds out just who has her cousin. And there was no Draco/Hermione in this chapter =( LOL, i expect to see some in the next one... =) until then Happy Writing!!

Lady B
xoxo
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew it. I effing knew it! Tom was Voldy, I knew it!! Now what?! That is not a nice spot to stop this chappy!! You have have have to update soon! Please don't make us wait long to see how Ruby fares!
Her lines at the end were awesome, though, very "Ruby"-esque. Very in character.
person PotterEntourage
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Death Eater Garb + Mask, Leather Gloves, "I want you to dominate me"....Whoooooooooooo *thud* Girlllll, that was delicious! I mean super delicious! Go Roddy Go! Poor Ruby, who will save her *cough, Ron, cough*?
person smmz79
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well tom is definitely smooth.... and what a fantastic sex scene with hermione and draco... and i second your little statement at the end of the chap... i would love that treatment as well.... yummooo
person Lady Kao
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story a bit too much at times....you almost had me panting with that last chappy! I want a Draco of my very own!!! But then...who doesn't. I really like the way you are taking the story and especially with the ex death eaters (Bella most of all) I'm also intrigued as to how you are going to bring voldy in with the rest of the "cast". Can't wait for the next chappy!!!!!!

Blessings,

Lady Kao