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for Upside Down

by Kooldragon400

schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww babe, I was the only review. Phoeey on the others. Buttheads!!

Now this is the angst I expected in the last chapter. Wow. the poor babe. My heart goes out for her so desperately. I hope to God, that someone will find her. Is that he guardian angel trying to whither away the pain for her. I loved that part the most, when he spoke to her. When she felt caress of her face. I loved that. I thought it was brilliant.

I hope you dont get down with this story. I'm such a fan, and I love it. I hope my review lights that fire to a dull orange. <3
person Aimee
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so dark!!! I liked the beginning of the story sooo much that I can
person char_marcus
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm could it be a pheonix on the way to help ruby? i've just read this story from the start and think its great, dark, fluffy in places, bellatrix makes me laugh as does narcissa's pregnancy lol, keep up the good work n i look forward to future updates :D
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read this entire story in two hours...amazing. Truly, I love it. I did have to skip over the Ruby's rape part just because rape doesn't sit well with me but eh the good in this story far outweights that.
person laur
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep it going! Love the story. Alittle dark but I can dig it!
person CatalinaM
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooooooo good...i just started it when you posted the last chapter and i'm hooked!! ^.^
I'm really looking forward to reading a lot more of the story!! Update soon please ^.^

~Cat
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. =P I have it under my favorites so that I can keep up and make sure when the next one is out, btw... the idea of having alot of his people on the good side is very intersting, I hope you keep this story up!!!! =D
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh God Please help Ruby! Make it stop! This chapter had me cringing away from the screen, please no more, poor girl!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little disappointed. Not by the length. But it wasn't as angsty as I expected. But when you're busy, I understand the energy just isn't in it.

I can't wait to hear how they plan this though. I'm waiting for the next chapter, love. Hope your week gets better. Don't get down. =)
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Poor Ruby! Istarted crying for her, I can't begin to imagine her pain. I hope she can survive it, and still have some of her old self intact. Please don't make us wait long. I need to know how this turns out! They have to save her before it gets too much worse!