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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow RUBY RUBY RUBY.... poor thing... and everyone is freaking out it shows how close she came to everyone even the crazy ones... i LOVE that sirius was laughing like he was mad him and bella do have somethings in common... and i loved that she was off in thought rubbing her hubbiesthigh until she figured something out then she smacked him that was funny great job
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
god this storys engaging lol it makes me cringe at some plot points (poor ruby) and gasp at others and the lovely lil funny moments always make me smirk :P
congrats and keep writting!!!
congrats and keep writting!!!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, get to digging up the old dead Aunt, then guys, cause you've just got to get Ruby away from Voldie!! You've just got to! Sevvy, get to brewing that potion! Hehe. (I liked how Bella called Snape "Sevvy," obviously!) I really liked the song at the end, very sweet. I'm glad Ruby has an angel with her, I hope she can hold strong for a little longer. Can't wait for more.
And "....I cordially invite you to kiss my ass..." Looved it! Haha.
And "....I cordially invite you to kiss my ass..." Looved it! Haha.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, there's hope for Ruby! YAY! Hope! Moving chapter, I actually teared up.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, poor Ruby! I can't imagine. poor poor girl. I hope they help her soon, they have to!!
And I'm sorry you only got one review on the last chapter! I have been away, or I most definately would have reviewed!! Can't wait for more!
And I'm sorry you only got one review on the last chapter! I have been away, or I most definately would have reviewed!! Can't wait for more!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since it was all angst i had to skip some parts but overall it was good. hope your not offended i really do like your story
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick note to let you know how much I am enjoying this story,
Your writing style and characterisations are so believable.
Keep it up
I am an avid reader of this story
Your writing style and characterisations are so believable.
Keep it up
I am an avid reader of this story
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating...loved the Ruby stand alone chapter xxxx can't wait to read more
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is simply amazing!!!! way to go with Ruby!! I mean, it sucks what's happening to her, but she keeps that spark that makes the readers want to know what's she's gonna say next....
the turn you gave Bella is....interesting, I mean she's supposedly a complete bitch, which she is, but you 've made her softer which in this case is totally justified, it wouldn't fit the story any other way.
Just wanted to say, thank you!!!! and please keep writing 'cause you've made totally obssesed with this story!
the turn you gave Bella is....interesting, I mean she's supposedly a complete bitch, which she is, but you 've made her softer which in this case is totally justified, it wouldn't fit the story any other way.
Just wanted to say, thank you!!!! and please keep writing 'cause you've made totally obssesed with this story!
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
dude, i love it
sorry i havent reviewd earlier
this is the first time ive read the story
but still, luv it luv it luv it!!!!
keep goin
i like the fact that ruby is like praying for gads help or whatever
you dont see that in many storys
which is one of the many manymany ways that make this storry unique
dude, i love it
sorry i havent reviewd earlier
this is the first time ive read the story
but still, luv it luv it luv it!!!!
keep goin
i like the fact that ruby is like praying for gads help or whatever
you dont see that in many storys
which is one of the many manymany ways that make this storry unique