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for Upside Down

by Kooldragon400

schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far (I'm only at the point where Hermione introduces them to the Order) but I'm a little confused as to what Sirius is. You didn't explain that in this chapter, and I think it would have helped. Other than that, I LOVE Bellatrix watching Spongebob! Ruby is okay, and I really like how you've portrayed the Malfoys and Bellatrix. I can't wait to read more!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahahaaha oh God. They crack me up. i can picture sirius' girly scream and the giggles. oh boy.

I loved it. I swear our chapters just get better and better. very well written. <3
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent update im so glad that ruby is finally home!! the fact that she has a guardian angel to help her through was excellent! i cant wait to read what you have planned for the next chapter.
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow what a great chapter.. i am soo happy that Ruby was saved.. i hate reading about torture especailly children.. its sick and wrong...
but you needed to add this to the story to make it soo awesome...
cannot wait to read more!!!
person katiemay
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the well-known incantation of the Three Witches in Shakespeare's Macbeth, 1605
my favorite one :) nice story ive been reading all along just dont review often
person katiemay
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fillet of a fenny snake,
In the cauldron boil and bake;
Eye of newt, and toe of frog,
Wool of bat, and tongue of dog,
Adder
person serenity
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Luv it!!!
luv the song too.
I like Ruby's spirit. Hows she's not afraid to tell someone off, even if she does get hurt for it.
That shows that she doesnt let any one control her. I think that if Voldemort wasnt a killing maniac, she could most likely beat the living crap out of him.
I wonder what hermione will do to him once she finds Ruby
lulz
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a little short, but with that said it was brilliant. Best chapter by far, except for maybe the I laughed so hard I almost peed my pants chapter. (Lucius, pink hair, funny scene behind the couch)

This chapter held a lot of heart and hope. It's definitely the turning point in the story and you did a marvalous job with it. That song was so full of heart and hope it brought a few tears to my eyes.

You should be really proud of this chapter. I really loved and I'm sure others do as well.

oh and cordial invitation to kiss your arse, Can we make it a joint party? I definitely have a few people I would love to kiss me ass.

eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

-your loyal reviewer dM

p.s. Don't let life get you down. It can be a bitch, but only if you let it ;)
person Laur
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie....I wonder what is going to happen.
person pickles87
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another good chapter.
What is the name of the song?
Waiting for more.

PS I think Sirius likes the darkside more than he lets on.