rate_review Reviews

I loved it
It was amazing poor bella saving a baby and standing up to voldemort wow good fo her. sirius is funny
Update soon

ahh bella got the baby :) great chapter can't wait for more :))

But but but...she's pregnant!!!!!! Why would they let her go fight?! She could have killed herself, she could have killed the baby, ESPECIALLY with that smoke intihilation(sp?). What the Hell was she thinking!!!

I do love her new heroic side. Her new attitude on everything, and yet she is the same old snarky rude and a bit mad Bella. Although she's calmed some in the crazy department.

And Draco, I would have liked to hear from him. Granted Voldemort nevr cared for the boys services the way he did for Bella's, so it made sense that he didn't bother to sway the boys decision. I wonder what will happen to the baby now. Poor little one. And what will happen to Bella's baby. Stupid wench could have killed them both *shakes head at her*

Don't you just hate those blabber-mouthed house elves. First it was Kreacher, when he blamed things to Voldemort about Sirius and the whole veil thing, now it's that Mafloy elf just chit-chatting away like Voldemort deserves to know. Silly little things.

Well I can't wait for the next chapter. I do hope the battle is coming. I also hope its bit longer of a chapter ;) haha. Don't fret over it though. You know I'll love it whether or not it's short or long.

WOW!!!!!!!!!! I am so in love with your story....I have been in front of the computer for hours reading it and it is now almost 2am I couldn't stop. I love the way you have portrayed the characters, it is amazing. first time I have ever liked Bella!!! can't wait for the next update...

OH wow what a great chap... voldie sure is pissed... bella saved a child... wow this is obviously a sign that she is changing and i am sure it has something to do with the kindness she was shown by hermione and ruby

I have read what you have posted of this story, and I have to say...I love your work. The sarcasm, the wit, the plot, the pace, and the big one; you actually use punctuation and spelling. Grammar is not an unheard word. That is incredibly refreshing. I have had to stop reading a story with a great plot before, simply because I couldn't stand it all running together. Ruby and Bella in your story are two of the most well-written characters I have seen. I also must take the time to appreciate your Dramione areas. You don't have either one completely out of character, and that is so important. I look forward to reading more of you. Good luck

And remember...
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and watch the world wonder how you did it.

Lopez

hahaha no worries. I assumed you meant to do it. I apparently have this habit of telling people to do things they had already planned. Go me.
I understood forgetting things. My work is always done late at night as well. Unless I have a day off work and can keep it to myself. Life gets in the way too often.

Anyways,, I think a whole chapter on Voldemort was stupendous and fitting. He's reaction was that to be expected if not a little graphic. I knew he was spiteful and vicious but never so violent. It's like one of those gory horror movies.

I am however disappointed with the ending. I was so hoping Voldemort would not have found about the Malfoys and Bellatrix until the final battle. I thought it would have been a bigger blow that way. OH well, I am excited to see however, what Voldemort will do with this new information.

Beware the wrath of a pissed-off Voldy! This is not going to be pretty.............

Okay so. The beginning went really well, and I even like where this whole Voldemort/Harry thing is going. My disappointment however lies within the fact that we have yet to receive news on Voldemorts reaction to Ruby's disappearance. He was bound to notice, and there should have been a reaction, and it should have been in this chapter. We got to experience Ruby's standpoint and everyone else's on her rescue in the last chapter, so this chapter should have had something about the bad side losing Ruby. Just a suggestion. I would have liked to have known, I've been looking everyday for this fic to update in hopes there would be a Voldemort scene.

So maybe next chapter?

Anyways, other than that it was good.

So is little Ruby the key to helping bring down Voldy? How fitting! Great chapter as usual, good luck on the job hunt!