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ahh another good chapter, keep them coming :D

good chapter.
Short.
But good.
I'm surpised that Molly's needles aren't going full speed ahead.
Are they going to cast another spell to see whom the child is related too?
It would be an interesting twist...
Waiting for more.

Well, I'm glad that Dumbley-dore (hehe) took over as Leader of the Order, but I'm not sure about the ending... I really want Bella to keep the baby, so I hope noone else will claim the babe.
Another lovely chapter!

i think that this was a needed chapter... i'm glad that ruby pointed of the debt part and it'll be interesting to see whether bella will use it to her advantage of just accept fate.... then again, now that her and roddy are having better and more frequent sex, maybe they'll be able to concieve on their own. i liked kingsley's whole reaction to everything.... him sayin... i don't wanna know, sat very well with me. i don't know if u noticed it or not, but at first u said that voldy was present at 2 of the families houses, then later on u said that he was at 3 of them... was it a slip up or was it cuz kingsley didn't know about him being at the fairwells... it might need slight clarification in the chapter.... but yes... thanx 4 the update!!! and oh yeah..... who care's if their older.... snape or sirius hookin up with her will be sooooo hot... she could feel comforted by their fatherliness and experience and simutaniously be turned on!!!! yeah... well maybe it's just my fantasy to hook up wit a hot older guy who's can gently and with so much care and attention school me on the true meaning of making love to somebody!!! oh yeah!

hmmm. I must it admit it lacked a little something. Something I can't put my finger on.

Bella gave in way to quickly.
I could have sworn earlier in the story we found out they were going to be pregnant together. Because there was an installment where you mentioned their differences in pregnancies. Narcissa couldn't go near food and always looked sick whereas Bella was always munching on something happily.

Maybe I'm making things up?

haha

Oh just wonderful! I was three chapters behind, and they were alllll amazing! Hmmm, Ruby and Ron? .... I'm not a huge Ron fan, but if he makes Ruby happy... :) And her dream that can help Harry, brilliant!

Oh, and the house elf. I loved that scene! Go little house elf! Yesss! :)

More, please!

So yeah, i've just discovered ur story and read thru it today. i must admit that it was quite entertaining. at first i wasn't sure if i could stomach an obnoxious american, but with ur expert characterization i grew quitefond of her. then the whole shower masterbastion scene was hot... then i liked when draco and lucius had the tussle in the kitchen. u know what else i thought was good.... the insight into bella.... her desire to have a kid and a better sex life...now, i figured that ruby would get kidnapped, but i thought that the guy who was wooing ruby was a were wolf or something, not Voldy so that was a pleasent twist, then i was absolutely stunned when u actually when thru with the rape of ruby.... now many ppl would insinuate about the situation and tip toe around it in order to not offend the audience, but i apprieciate u not doing that... that made the story real, that along with the fact that she wasn't miraculously rescued a day later. oh yeah,... the cemetery.... sirius getting punked.... priceless!so ok, that's all i have for u right now... i look forward to ur next post! oh.... and if ron hooks up with ruby.... please let him suddenly have the urge to give her pleasure and not be a prat to her sexually like he was to hermione.... or maybe.... ruby and snape could hook up.... she did like his accent( and somehow the thought of that turns me on)... or maybe her and sirius would be a better match... they did have good chess matches... i guess i'll leave the choice up to u... u are a brilliant writer and i'm sure that however u work it out i'll be satisfied... alright... bye again!

Your action scenes are the best! (and the lemons, and the transistions.....)Awwww, Bella saved the baby, what a softie! Wonder if it has yellow eyes? ;)

omg bella has a baby!!!

Okay, you have finally convinced me to review. I never review, just enjoy the story. This is my third ever story to review, so feel honoured. I love your story. I adore Ruby and I hated seeing her hurt. I cant wait to see more updates. So please, move it on. I cant wait to read about the battle and Voldys demise. Please hurrx.