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for Upside Down

by Kooldragon400

person Nitesfool
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! so i had wrote this long as review for u then i mistakenly clicked on a link and lost the whole message, i can't even begin to rewrite all that i had for u right now... i'll try to remember it alittle later... so for right now... good job!
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! I hope Ron's changes are geniune and not manipulative like Hermione said, and Draco's prayers and thoughts were adorable! Another great update!
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww WOW..
i been away on vacation for 2 weeks and I didnt get a chance to post a review.. omg this story is sooo great!!!! I love it and I missed it while i was away. hmm my fiance wouldnt let me take my laptop with me so i was on Upside down withdrawl..
Well i am back now, and cannot wait to read more!!!
person smmz79
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great chap.... bella knocked up she is going to be a ball of fun when she goes through the mood swings i wonder who will get hexed first... ahhh draco how sweet in your own way... good luck turning hermione into a spoiled purebloods wife that should be entertaining to
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOSH.

Brilliant! I really loved the bit with Mione's scream scaring Ruby.. well, not liked it, but you know, it makes the story more credible, more real.. And I like her design for the robes, as well.
Ruby and Ron.. Ron and Ruby... I've got my doubts, but it could work...
And I loved Bella and her sisters' reunion scene, also.

Can't wait for the next update!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter, I caught up on all those that I'd missed and I have to say I LOVE IT!!! This story is developing so well, I love the fact that Bella is pregnant! I can't wait to see what Rodolphus says =D Brilliant my sweet!
person smmz79
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT OMG great chap... ron and ruby huh i like it!!!!! and bella with two blue lines hmmm nice chap!!!!
person char_marcus
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol great way to end the chapter a pregnancy test and no box lmao
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha. shit. I hope I didn't ruin it for anyone. hahaha BUT YAY! oh god, too priceless that she took a muggle pregnancy test.

I'm not sure I'm too keen on the Andromeda part. I expected a little hesitation on Bella's part. She was so vehemently against her sisters life, it would be hard for her to relinquish so quickly I would think. But meh. It was nice to know Bella is changing.

Tonks will be okay right? Because she is a character I hold dear. I would hate for her to not be okay.

So now on to the battle. It's awfully planned. Takes a lot of the fun and spontaneity out of such an event. I mean it's like....let's all convene at an hour we can agree upon and when we give you the thumbs up you try to kill one another. *waves a checkered flag* I thought it a bit odd. But I did love the losers being trapped within this warehouse thing. I thought that a brilliant idea.

I eagerly await Voldemorts destruction....He will die right? RIGHT? *bites nails*
person nitesfool
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH MY!!!!! it sure is getting interesting!!!!! So now the order's got their robes!... i hope hermione doesn't freak out cuz ruby left a note instead of talkin to her first... and ron... hnmmm.... i'm still secretly fantasizing about Snape and Sirius(yummy!)... and Bella singing the song... it was sooooo sweet(*tear*)... i hope everything is ok Nymphy and i well, someone is lookin over my shoulder so i can't finish reviewin....hurry up and post again!

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