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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!! aaaaaaaaaaahhh this fic its awesome I love it and poor Ruby, I love her spunk and how easy you get to love her and well there are a lot of details
-Bella's turning
-her platonic affair with spongebob
-her submission to her husband
-and last but but not least flipp;ing the bird to voldemort with a very important statement "Fuck You"
-Ruby's plotting to get rid of Ron
-Harry love for the piano
-and a lot more
one of my favorites its the guardian part with the "Hold on Child of Magic" My gods, it brought me to tears
I love it and well update soon and good luck getting that job
take care
Love
Lola
-Bella's turning
-her platonic affair with spongebob
-her submission to her husband
-and last but but not least flipp;ing the bird to voldemort with a very important statement "Fuck You"
-Ruby's plotting to get rid of Ron
-Harry love for the piano
-and a lot more
one of my favorites its the guardian part with the "Hold on Child of Magic" My gods, it brought me to tears
I love it and well update soon and good luck getting that job
take care
Love
Lola
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me too.... I was an Australian size 16-18(US 12
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And when I use the dam thing it goes spako on me and types strange symbols everywhere!!!! ARGH
:D
:D
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story!! I hope that you keep updating as fast as you can!!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how can ron makes jokes in tihe middle of a battle lol...i also liked ruby's killing of hawthorne...excellently written!
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK YEAH!!!! THIS WEEKEND WAS GREAT
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok i mst say i luv u. Nt in a gay sense, bt more in th 'u seem lyk such n awesom grl' wy. I luv ur ritin style & humor. It mks me feel gud 2 no i'm nt th only nawty Christian grl readin ths stuff. Bt hey, i'm 18, why shld i feel bd, its legal now rite? & i must say, I feel 4 u in th no sex dpt. Only i wasnt sch a gud grl & did it (crude wy of putting it huh?), bt thn realised th error of my wys & totlly wish i hd waited 4 th rite guy :(
I wld rite mre bt am usin my fone & itll only giv me a few lttrs :(
I wld rite mre bt am usin my fone & itll only giv me a few lttrs :(
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. okay let's go shall we? lol I know you adore my reviews!! admit it!! ;)
1. All the emotions in this chapter were perfect. If the battle is coming up in the next chapter, this was a needed emotional transition chapter, and I thought it was great. We saw Narcissa's worries last chapter and this leaves the others. We know how Ruby feel b/c of her date with Ron. Harry, well it's just obvious so the decision not to include his feelings works well. All in all I really liked what you did here.
2. If Roddy makes he give up that baby or he dies, I don't think i'll forgive you all too quickly. Same goes for that list I gave you of people not allowed to die. lol p.s. the last bit when he confesses that to Bella was sweet. My heart swelled.
3. I absolutely love the idea of the final battle being in parts. I honestly think it's a great way to get everyone into the final battle. I would totally start it out with Ruby and Ron, move to Luius(I highly doubt Narcissa will be fighting, but a scene with her along at the house might be good), then I would move on to some of the death eaters, then Roddy and Bella, THEN Dumbledore and say like ooo ooo GREYBACK!!! hahaha Dumbledore would totally kick that creepers ass! Then it would be Snape, maybe fighting Dolohov or some other creepy and skilled death eater and then Hermione and Draco. Then obviously Harry and Voldemort.
Maybe pair it like this: Ruby and Ron and Lucius(Narcissa) in part 1
Roddy, Bella, Dumbledore, and Snape in part 2
Hermione and Draco should get their own chapter(it is a Dramione)
And then Voldy dies.
Thats what I would do if you wanted to split the final battle up. It just covers everyone, maybe with some randoms like tonks and shacklebolt and sirius thrown in you know? Just a siggestion.
Eagerly awaiting the next installment. LETS GO ORDER LETS GO!!!!
1. All the emotions in this chapter were perfect. If the battle is coming up in the next chapter, this was a needed emotional transition chapter, and I thought it was great. We saw Narcissa's worries last chapter and this leaves the others. We know how Ruby feel b/c of her date with Ron. Harry, well it's just obvious so the decision not to include his feelings works well. All in all I really liked what you did here.
2. If Roddy makes he give up that baby or he dies, I don't think i'll forgive you all too quickly. Same goes for that list I gave you of people not allowed to die. lol p.s. the last bit when he confesses that to Bella was sweet. My heart swelled.
3. I absolutely love the idea of the final battle being in parts. I honestly think it's a great way to get everyone into the final battle. I would totally start it out with Ruby and Ron, move to Luius(I highly doubt Narcissa will be fighting, but a scene with her along at the house might be good), then I would move on to some of the death eaters, then Roddy and Bella, THEN Dumbledore and say like ooo ooo GREYBACK!!! hahaha Dumbledore would totally kick that creepers ass! Then it would be Snape, maybe fighting Dolohov or some other creepy and skilled death eater and then Hermione and Draco. Then obviously Harry and Voldemort.
Maybe pair it like this: Ruby and Ron and Lucius(Narcissa) in part 1
Roddy, Bella, Dumbledore, and Snape in part 2
Hermione and Draco should get their own chapter(it is a Dramione)
And then Voldy dies.
Thats what I would do if you wanted to split the final battle up. It just covers everyone, maybe with some randoms like tonks and shacklebolt and sirius thrown in you know? Just a siggestion.
Eagerly awaiting the next installment. LETS GO ORDER LETS GO!!!!
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so sweet!
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww I hope Bella and Rodolphus make it through the battle with Voldie.