rate_review Reviews

Few authors of fanfics have made me laugh, cry, and stay up til 3 just to finish but you bave definitely manaved a fantastic fic right here! It was a pleasure to read xx

I figured I should review since this is the second time I've read this story. I felt like reading a little AS/S today and started to pick my way through the fics on AFF. I remembered this story and was racking my brain trying to remember the title or where I'd read it because I had liked it so much. Luckily I managed to stumble upon it again.

Frankly I fucking love this story. So much AS/S stuff is sickly sweet and both Albus and Scorpius are infuriatingly docile. Not the good kind of docile either, the passionless boring kind. I'm tickled that you've written Scorpius as a slutty sex god. Frankly I've always considered him to be that sort of character in my head but so many authors write him as some sort of boring, pathetic waif. I just can't help but feel that no Malfoy has a waifish bone in their body, especially not Scorpius. I like him as the aggressor and I like Albus as the poor little waif.

Basically, this is hands down the best AS/S story I've ever read and I think it will always be my favorite.

Great story!

This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. It was a joy to read and I hope you will continue to write such beautiful things in the future. It has inspired me to write my own Alby/Scorpius story, and I only hope I can do even half as good a job as you have.

Absolutely brilliant! I almost cried at least 9 times.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read!! It was a pleasure to read such a well written and emotinally charged story. Thankyou.

I've read your fic in one go and I really enjoyed it. The only slight criticism I could offer is that the characters sometime are "too much", especially the relationship between Rose and Scorpius. My favourite part was the Harry/Draco relationship and how they managed to "heal" after the war. Write another fic soon please!

(Chapter 1)

Wow, looks as if Scorpius has inherited all of Draco's and Lucius' arrogance. This story is complete, and usually I wouldn't have reviewed until I had read it all, but I also wanted to say that you have one of the most interesting profile pages I've ever read, and I'm absolutely green with envy that you actually get to write for a living! I also found your choice of study for when you go back to school, Linguistic Anthropology, very interesting.

Obviously you don't need me to tell you your story is well written, but I will say that I like the beginning, am intrigued about the rest, and will review again when I've finished it.

Up to Chapter 4 and liking it very much so far, but I'd like to say that next time it would be better to put more spacing between your paragraph to make it a little easier on the reader's eyes. Just a suggestion.

AWWWW,
I love sap and fluff and a happy ending, some angst in the middle and you got yourself a great story.
Great read, I hope you write some more fics (I'll read them in a sec) you have a lot of talent.
Thanks for your hard work, looking forward to more

Love always,
Robyn.