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for A Beautiful Disaster

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful one shot... loved it!!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see Draco man up, isn't it? Well done! Some niggling typos, but the story was just lovely. Don't we wish all men could be like Draco? :D
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just so sweet. :)

And my goodness woman, where the heck do you find time to look after three wonderful children, maintain a career and write all these stories that I must now find time to read??????
person mariteri
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I wasn't going to read this. I have a real beef with songfics. It's a personal hang up as I feel most writers depend too much on the song to provide most of the text rather than using it to inspire them to write a better story. True, this wasn't my cup of tea, but I liked your story once I got around my own hang ups. Keep up the good work.
person Utopia
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When did this go up??

Typical Hermione, desperate to belong in a world she doesn't quite fit into, and not realising she fits perfectly without having to prove herself.

Pureblood manners are very old world, and the neuvo media latch onto it and twist the innocence into debauchery. So sad.

Draco could do to sit her down and talk some sense into her; or whisk her away to a nice exotic locale and let the media 'accidentally' snap pictures of them together. muhahaha

And Slytherin subtlety flies out of the window with the very pretty butterfly! lol!

*sob* I cry at weddings and soppy fics of brilliance.
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was simply lovely......
person kazfeist
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet! :D
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOVED IT. It was so sweet. YAY! Karma point for you. :)
person carha
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. I love DM/HG fics, especially yours
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a cute story