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for Keep On Loving You

by oreotilly314

schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i stll thinkthey should be mated because it justyuck to have have him wanting a child update soon please
person Jan
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I'm intrigue to see what's going to happen next. ^_^

Please update chapter 4 soon.

Jan ^_~
person shey
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked, can't wait for more!!!!
person akume
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter. Can't wait to read Narcissa's and Draco's reaction to Harry Potter. Until then.
person alma
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I like sleepy Draco and runaway Harry. Although I guess Vernon's persistent beating of the rules of polite society into Harry's head really paid off for the boy, as it allowed him to make a good first impression with Lucius. (heh.)
person h2elena
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
short but good hopefully there will be more soon. I'd love to see harry/lucius as bonded veela mates they are so hot and there definitely not enough harry/lucius stories out there, keep up the good work. please email me when you update. helenaloud@gmail.com
person sanda
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it! Poor Harry, all alone. Wonder what he will do next, and how he ends up with Lucius!
person h2elena
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok um its a little rushed with the plot so many things seem to be going on at once. I do like that you have made lucius part elvish and i love harry with lucius. I look forwrd to reading more. Update soon. Nice job.