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March 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hope you finish it
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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good so far keep it up
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May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning, you should continue. Keep up the good work!
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far! I really really really would like you to continue writing and know it has been a long time since you have updated, but this seems like this would be a wonderful story. So please continue, I would really like to see what happens. These kind of stories are always so wonderful!
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story and I love it!!!! please please update soon!!!
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon *kisses*
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this sounds interesting.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi I think your story seems original enough, and you have a really good plot. I am however slightly puzzled as to how the Harry/Lucius pairing will appear, as I could not finish your story. The reason I write this review is to urge you to, either start using a beta or seriously revise your story. Because your typos and grammar, makes it hard to read sometimes. Which is a real pity, since your story has real potential. I hope you don't take this as criticism, it is merely ment as advice. English isn't my first language, so I totally understand that it can be hard to write. It is after all a complex language, I hope you at least think about my advice. Huggles MM
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great story. I can't wait to read more soon.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please...this is really good so far.