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by FelineKitten

schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Blush* Thanks guys!

Oh Im so glad. I really hoped that this writing business would improve
spelling and grammar malfunctions. I hope the chapters continue to be readable
and enjoyable! :)
person luvhp
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I like this one.
Your spelling and grammer have improved in your stories :)
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This seems to have potential. It was a bit stilted to start, but when the story continues Im sure everything will smooth out. Love the litle girls name btw...
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooh i like it!

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