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for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

by crmoon

person Anon
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Love it. So Harry doesn't have to have sex with everybody for the bond to contain all of Voldemort's inner circle? Just a few?
person dino1
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot!!! Is Harry technically considered to be married to everyone with good old Tom as head dom? Does the bond include Remus. How old is Harry? Will the bond help Bella stay sane and did they correct Harry's vision? Outside of doing the ritual for a peaceful end to the war why did Tom include his inner circle He doesn't seem to be the sharing type. These questions of mine don't have to be answered right away. Can't wait till next chapter.
person dino1
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow interesting story. I want to know who else he will be bound to. Will tom and friends be drugging harry too or blackmailing him for the potion that they feed Harry requires him to be willing? At least with Remus he was already attracted to him. Is there going to be Mpreg? I really can't wait for next update!
person kunitsu
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was an unexpected sex scene and I didnt really expect that they were going to make a competition out of it.
person darkwish
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was very confusing but I can't wait to see where your going.
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is going on? At first Voldemort acts nice and tries to help Harry, now they are all going to rape him. I'm very confused. What is the deal with Dumbeldore? He wants to put Harry in St. Mungos? What the fuck is his problem. I must say, to have Remus rape Harry is kind of something Voldemort would think of and it is a nice twist. I would like to know what Harry has that Voldemort needs. And what is the potion Severus is brewing for? It has something to do with a bond right? Well, is Voldemort going to bond with Harry? And what the hell is the prize for the person that makes Harry scream the loudest? I really do like this story, though it is getting a bit confusing. Could you please explain what is going on a bit better? I'm not saying that you have to add more detail or go back and fix the chapters already posted, just explain the stuff in later chapters. And if some of my questions were answered in the story, I apologize for not seeing them. Please update soon. I await your next chapter. And please make it long.
person kunitsu
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Dumbledore for doing such a thing to Severus, I just hope Voldemort gets to Harry before Dumbledore does.
person celtic_creature
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Intense chapter. Poor Sevy. Please update soon, I love this story
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please.
person Selera
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dang it.. dang it dang it.. Want to see more of this.