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for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

by crmoon

person dino1
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think your Snape/Hagrid isnan interesting pairing and I enjoy their scenes immensely.
person wynja
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's so unpredictable... I hope I don't miss the next chapter, which I hope will be sooooon...? ;o)
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story what a big cliff hanger you left there. Cant wait for the update.
~Ruby~
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it but pleae find away to bring sirius back and let harry get taking back to voldy and the group question does that mean remus is harry mate to
person kunitsu
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didnt really expect that Harry would be able to escape that fast. Damn Dumbledore and his scheming, I hope Severus gets to Harry fast. Oh and I was wondering why you paired Severus up with Hagrid, I think it's the first time I saw that pairing
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude its been a fucking week update already!
person dino1
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Severus can return Harry to his mates before he is hurt!
person darkwish
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow you definitely made all the threads come together but how will harry react? will he react like a rape victim or like someone just found something they didn't know was missing until they found it?
person kunitsu
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just hot, when will Voldemort get his turn and what about Remus what will happen to him. I was a bit surprised that Harry misunderstood what they meant by making him scream, I guess he is still a bit naive. How about Severus he is part of the inner circle, will he get a turn with Harry to.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm still kind of confused...but I must say this is really good so far. Please update soon. I really enjoyed this chapter. So, all the Inner Circle Death Eaters are connected with Harry and Voldemort? And what is with the bond between Harry and Voldemort? Will Harry start to trust Voldemort ever? Will he panic when he wakes up, or will he be calm and understanding? Well, not understanding.