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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and can't wait for more. I'm a writer as well (though nothing is published here) and have some advice: it's very confusing to say "the spy" and then use the plural they and their when talking about him/her. I've been told by teachers to either use a pronoun or to use it. It might clear up some confusion!
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! Can;t wait for tom/harry action. Can't wait for more information about the bonding method used in this story. All of harry's mates will be happy to see him. Still will their wives be jealous?
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!! It is getting interesting!!! I can't wait for the next chappies!!! Will Harry accept his mates??? 'Cause actually he was forced,
or will he evene survive?? waaaaa, please please update as soon as possible!! Keep up the good work...
Ya ne!!
or will he evene survive?? waaaaa, please please update as soon as possible!! Keep up the good work...
Ya ne!!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say this story is unpredictable. I try guessing what would happen but turns out differently. Very interesting.
BUT Why did you kill Remus?! I can see it was Sirius that he met (I think) and I felt happy for them. But why oh why? I could try to guess that you might somehow bring the dead back, but I might be wrong again, lol.
And when will Harry be with Voldemort? So wanting to know.
I do hope you will update soon! I'll be waiting.
BUT Why did you kill Remus?! I can see it was Sirius that he met (I think) and I felt happy for them. But why oh why? I could try to guess that you might somehow bring the dead back, but I might be wrong again, lol.
And when will Harry be with Voldemort? So wanting to know.
I do hope you will update soon! I'll be waiting.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is actually getting a bit creepy. I wonder what'll happen next. Cheers!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took a while for this story to stop confusing me but now that it has...I'M HOOKED! And I think I will tar and feather you for leaving me hanging with that last chapter! :)
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow the order sure is getting crazier and crazier. I am glad that Hermoine is on Harry's side, i just hope that that portkey sent them to Voldemort
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!
I see you have updated this and I see I will have some questions.
like who is with Draco?, where did moine take Harry?
Why did you kill off Remus and who is that with him?
I see you have updated this and I see I will have some questions.
like who is with Draco?, where did moine take Harry?
Why did you kill off Remus and who is that with him?
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, are you giving up on this story? I hope you're not because its sooo amazing...but you haven't updated in so long =(
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and so original! Loved it, ccan't wait for the next chapter!