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for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

by crmoon

person Jags
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
noooo! more there must be more ~looks under a convenient rock and pouts~ it's so good i want more
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, but I have to admit I totally agree with Harry...I mean Voldemort and the inner circle did rape him.....I mean it might have been pleasurable but it wasn't really consensual...Plus for how much they care, Voldemort and the Inner circle, are kind of bastardy to him...

I like your story but I hate that even though they "care" for him, they forced a bond on him...I mean they should have gone slower, and talked to him first, with all the evidence they have of evil!Dumbledore, it would have made it clear, and then Harry wouldn't be this way/like that.

I still love your story but I feel bad for Harry :D
Can't wait for more and I hope you don't think I am bashing your writing or anything, I was just speaking my mind I really do enjoy the way you write your story!

Until your next update,
Jades
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I don't get it, what's going on with Harry? He's mated to Voldemort, but the bond isn't active, or what? I mean, it's a good story, and I want to know what happens, but it's very confusing. Cheers!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey love you! would you mind putting up a new chapter before new years?
person Laie
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this fic! I wouldn't mind another Hagrid/Snape fic, you have gotten me interested in that pairing!

Merry Xmas!
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so basically your story is AMAZING! Its so hot. Please dont keep us waiting for a long time! Update soon! It'd be the best christmas gift ever!
person Jan
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell! Please tell me that Severus is never going back to that sick bastard?
What of Harry? Is he still going to be acting mistrusting after this? or Is he finally going to accept his bond to all his mates?

Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^

Jan
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What happened to you? Those chapters, when everyone had sex with Harry, were so amazingly hot. But then, the story began to dwindle to a stop. Why? You hardly ever update anymore. Please start again, you're an amazing writer.
person Makovaso
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.
person jill
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
does all the shagging that happened earlier not count??