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for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

by crmoon

schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was so incredibly twisty and complex and emotional and just wonderfully done! amazing work, i hope there's a sequel
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Every time I reread this I get a little sadder that there is no sequel. Such an intriguing story! Harry + Voldemort + Death Eaters = LOVE! Please keep up the great work.
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is this the end of the story, or will there be more chapters, if not is there are will there be a squel?
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! that was awsome. Is there more?
person Jags
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was great but is that the end?
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU FINALLY UPDATED! I'm so very happy! I'm going to go re-read and bask for a while...
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is awesome! Like, dude! I was a little iffy about the Severus/Hagrid pairing, but at the same time I can see your logic with it and I loved the story as a whole! Is this done? I just wanted to know, because if it is, that's fine, but it was an odd yet satisfying note to end it on. BTW, have I said that I freaking LOVE this?! Because I really do. Anyway, thank you for the great read, and I look forward to reading anything else you may have posted. :D
person Aalto
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can only say, that that last bit was unnecessary and drove you to a dead end. Unles you want to make an otherwise quite a good story into a depressing tragedy with the most wrongfull ending ever seen...??

With Voldemort dead and with him Harry and the iiner sircle, how on earth are you going to salvage this one?? It would be quite unlikely for them to survive the killing curse...

Quite frankly I'm dissapointed. There is no way for this story to end well now.
person misaki
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...just wow...i wonder what will happen next! please let me know when you update it. katrinadax@yahoo.com
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's getting interesting every chapter that I read!!!
I can't wait what you will come up with next!!!
Hope you will update soon!!
keep up the good work!

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