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by doyoueverwonder

schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far but if it's a story about school unity you might want to add some of the other houses.What do Harry and Ron think about what is going on? I always love it when Draco and Hermione get together.Can't wait to see what prank they pull next.
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters five and six

I think that it is very cool that Draco and Hermione are working together against the jerks in Slytherin house. It is great that the painting in the Slytherin commonroom is spying for them (DM & HrG), and that the first years are behind Hermione for treating them right. I thought that it was so cool how well Hermione's repelling charm worked to protect her and at the same time attack other by giving them what they try to use on her--brilliant!

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*SQUEE*
OMG--how absolutely delicious, extremely hot/sexy as hell, Hermione and Draco's coming together in a sexual frenzy--I LOVE IT!
;~D

Very well done--keep up the good work!
person kazfeist
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's a pretty good plot here, particularly with the unique twist of the re-Sorting. I am not sure that Slytherin House wouldn't realize Hermione's abilities earlier, though. They would do so, I think, even out of self-preservation. I mean, this is set after the war, in which she was a major player, right? I look forward to seeing how you develop the rest of the story. :D
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please, UPDATE soon!!!
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I cant wait to see slytherins reaction
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Re: chapter one

::cackling uproariously:: Too freaking cool Hermione being sorted into Slytherin!

I love this story!
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter three

Too freaking funny--dear gods, I love how both Draco and Snape complemented her and are in effect befriending her. I especially love how Snape won the bet as to when she would get her new housemates back. Brilliant!

Please update soon!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
INGENIOUS!!!! absolutely ingenious...I bloody love it! please continue...
person Camryn31
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaah yaaay yaaaaay
a funny snape, a nice draco a slytherin-y hermione
yaaay *applauds*
cmon, next chapter, pleaase!! :D
i love it
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a good update. i think you forgot to mention what house pansy was sorted into...did she stay in slytherin? other than that, i am still interested in seeing where this story goes....