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Oh, this story just screams SEQUEL!! I got email notifications that the story was up to chapter 16 on FF, but I can't access past chapter 10. Luckily I checked this site and found the completed version..YEA! Looking forward to reading more of your stories and hopefully "Love's Journeys". :-)

I found this and relly enjoyed the story. And what a cliffhanger n the end.
Mare

You need to work on a few things. I'm going to start with the first paragraph of this chapter:
"Severus sat in the living room of the home of his prized student, Hermione Granger. He, Albus, and Minerva had arrived two hours ago when a frantic Hermione flooed. The sight Severs saw brought back memories that he thought he had buried. Mr. Granger lay dead in a pool of his own blood, Mrs. Granger was barely alive and Hermione was kneeling on the floor, her mother

this is a really good fic.
is there going to be a sequel

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

You really have some "Sirius" (snicker) issues don't you?
I notice he is always such an ass in your fanfics. Why is that?

first i love the story!!! second----HOW COULD YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!! third-there better by a sequel coming up......and soon! i do hope is nice and LONG to make up for just leaving us hanging. :) do get to working on it PLEASE!!! :)

I really like this story a lot. Can you please write some more chapters?

The story was interesting but I think perhaps you need a Beta for some of your grammar and making the sentences link together. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. I know you had a negative comment about Severus being OCC but lets be honest, we all write him OCC because he never did get it on with Hermione, did he??? Just ignore the negative, thats what I did.

I noticed you're a fan of Most Haunted! LMAO!!! It made me smile seeing the names in the story... glad that Derek went up in smoke too, he was such a fraud!

God I love you! If only I could crawl inside your head and lay nestled in the brillant brain the conjures these stories I could be happy for the rest of my life! OOC or not, I prefer the way you wrote Severus and Hermione, as a reader it makes them far more relatable and enjoyable.
And some of your other combinations- mainly the Logan/Hermione- I can't thank you enough for. I thought I was the only weirdo out there that wanted to throw these two particular characters together. I am curious though what brought about that particular pairing.
I even enjoy the Star Wars ones, and I HATE Star Wars.... nevertheless I can't help but wonder if you are a Buffy the Vampire Slayer fan, because I would be ecstatic to see a Spike/Hermione fanfiction. God I get chills just thinking about it.
All that aside, I've read and enjoyed all of your stories (sometimes 3 or 4 times a night) and had to rack my brain to remember my account info just so I could write you a review.
Keep churning out the stories, and I'll keep reading!