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person carha
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun chapter. Definately looking forward to your next update
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy freakin' crap. That was SO HOTT! That's right. I did it. I gave that hot two T's that's how hot it was. lol Great update, I'm all shivery right now. I can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon!!
person Anguloce
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* DAMN that was HOT!!!! i love lucius when he's like that...so sexy and confident it makes me want to *ahem*...i need a cigarette now lol
person Shetan
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The continual characters build up of Lucius and Hermione with the introduction of Severus is marvellous.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 12-13: If Lucius helping Hermione with her clothes was amazing, Snape must be terribly gauche. I can
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again it was fantastic...you write such great stories...i hope you won't stop cause I'm addicted to your fics...xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
person Janeplay
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!! You can't just stop there!!! More story ASAP please!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, yeah, I'm enjoying it very much, just in case you can't tell. Your writing is very descriptive and easy to read, addictive almost, like Monsieur Malfoy...
person Utopia
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last exam of phase two is done! And it went better than I thought it would!

Vanity, thine name is Lucius.

Can I recommend the Ultimate Guide to Fellatio by Violet Blue. It's a cracking book that is quite frankly brilliant!

Asparagus isn't a particularly nice... um... flavour. It's of the same like as garlic. It doesn't taste nice.

Chocolate. Chocolate and Lucius in the SAME sentence? *whimpers*

She's not submissive, but she likes it rough and feral, rather than sweet and gentle. Ron never stood a chance.

I say this time and time again, if the potion/ritual/thingy that turned him back into something resembling human couldn't manage a nose - what chance would a penis have!

Nice oral scenes, verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice indeed.
person Jesse
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a good one. I like how they are doing things without a promt. Good progression of the story.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh that was hot!!! i'll share my desserts with lucius any day and i don't need Morganna to force me too it! lol, i am ready for the next serving!