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schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great updates SG! I really can't wait for more! Please add more soon
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see this is coming to an end..this part anyway...love you writing...its always mesmorising and exotic...great work xxxxx
person carha
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love waking up to a new chapter from you. A pleasure as always. Looking forward to the next update.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of my favourite chapters LOL, although im picturing the Lord as a certain dark one hehe
person Utopia
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It seems rather insulting that this fic has (at this point in time) less than 5000 hits. So many more people should be reading and enjoying this.

I've never woken up 'eye-to-eye' with a penis before... must be a strange thing to see when you first wake up!

The lip balm I use is called lip service! lol. I can't get enough of the stuff - its great for chapped lips!

When I first met Andy's Dad, he took pride in showing me around; we got to the certificates on the wall, and his Dad was so proud of his grades and number of exams. He then asked how I'd done on mine... and his eyebrows shot to his hairline when I told him I'd studied 12 GCSEs to Andy's 6, and that I'd got 6As, 4Bs (and for one of them I blacked out during the exam - I'd have probably got an A if I hadn't), 2Cs, when the highest Grade Andy had achieved was a C. His Dad seemed really confused/bemused/perplexed that I was more intellegent and scholarly than his son!

How long does it normally take for Lucius to get bored with a woman? Though, they weren't Hermione.

I LOVE the smell of hay and straw! They are such earthy scents, but really clean smells too! I used to love the morning clean up at the pet shop I used to work in because of the fresh hay and straw... does that make me strange??

Not to mention that a woman who did have sex with a horse (and it ended up on film, on the internet, (and was downloaded onto a few of my aquaintances' mobile phones) DIED of internal bleeding due to the horse being so big it ruptured some internal organs!

I know the Malfoys have elves, not maids, but I can see Lucius seducing a daughter of his Father's business partners or something.

Have you ever read any of the Sharpe books? There is a line in one that says 'Any advice, sir?'; and the officer replies (heading into a battle) 'If you're ever shagging in a hay stack, make sure you're the one on top!'. lol.

Awww... Lord of the manor is gonna marry the serving girl. awww. Though, their playing around is going to compromise them if anyone finds them. Though, with a bit of luck it won't be a shotgun wedding.

Hermione wasn't really impressed with the quasi-BDSM play; I think she was more aroused at the concept of just watching them and playing the voyeur for the first time. Though, who wouldn't be heading to happiness with Lucius's hand down her knickers? Sev and Lu (as you hint at a 3some) are going to have to be very careful with her and such play. She likes it rough, but I think the toys are going to have to wait.

12/10

person Olwen
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just hope I don't loose my wits before Lucius looses his. This is some build up.
person AvalonChristine
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your stories for a very long time and decided that it was finally time to review. I admit, I'm terrible about lurking. You are simply amazing. I love the individuality you give the characters and the uniqueness of their plights.

I can sympathize with Hermione about her hair length. My own is an inch short from what you described hers to be. It is a nightmare to sleep with. I can't wait for more of this story and any/all others you write.

Avie
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The anticipation for the next chapters haunts me on my drive home from work everyday. GREAT WORK!!!!!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14: The Hayseed Room
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah okay that was totally hot! More please!