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Chapter 5: EXCITEMENT!! Poor Lucius, his looks are attracting the females already. I think Hermione is not immune, but that Claire is a pest. And a rather wily, jealous one. Not good.

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I am really liking the way this story is going. I am very interested in what Morgana is going to make them do to get out the Temple. I am sure just normal hanky panky isn't going to be enough for her. I really like that you have Hermione teasing Lucius and being very secure in her nudity. I think more women need to be that way. Not to be flaunty and trashy, but to be sercure and confident. Keep up the wonderful work, and I can not wait to see what comes next. :-)

*curtsies* Milady, you honour me with your thanks; twas only a little poem. lol.

SHE'S BACK... and as per usual, we are not worthy!

Didn't Arthur and Morgana have a child - Mordred, who went off the rails big time and raged war?? Is that anything to do with the mucked-up magic of the temple??

I like the idea of the temple, JKR doesn't hint at any form of religion or faith among the magical, and it is something I've often debated. I see them as Earthy people and being more (for want of a better word) Pagan in their faith. Was this temple something of their religion? Are they like the Greeks/Romans with their multiple Gods and Goddesses depending on the situation? Was Morganna the equivalent of Aphrodite? Or is the temple just a legal knocking shop?

(Oooh, if you want to see the round table at their kinkiest, check out Angela Knight's work! She's a brilliant Romance author and I love her books!

Snape's not dead! and he's still on the shady side! woooo! *sells tickets to adoring stalkers*

I love how she's Slytherin enough to call in a favour and pull rank! lol! She was sorted into the wrong house, but she'd have been lynched in Slytherin. Though I was amused no end when I saw the death eater outfits looked rather like a nasty bunch of people who seem to like the 11th letter of the alphabet in triplicate. I think only the big people in the cinema picked up on that one.

Oooooh! Can I ask for a Death Eater too? Are they mail order? Is there a catalogue? Is there a seperate order form for essential accessories (hand cuffs, leather outfits, stuff that requires batteries?).

I can see that scene perfectly, Hermione asking for a death eater (and 2 sugars) and Kingsley sitting there stunned! Brilliant!

What did she do to p*ss off Snape?! *growls* Did she discover something before he did? Did she love him and leave him? Did she rescue him and him not want to be rescued... and are you going to tell us??

He he! Greyback in a muzzle! lol. Unfortunately the mental image that came to mind was Remus muzzled... oh dear, Genetics revision is getting to me...

FABULOUS START LUV! They say to write about what you know - and this sort of thing is right up your street, and all the more believable! 11/10

Perverted seems to be a must have on the Azkaban guard CV.

I really LOVE how you've darkened Hermione's hair and lengthened it. If it's plaited and hangs to her hips, then free of the style it must be past her bum! The weight would probably pull the curls into more manageable waves.

Is Herms a practicing dominatrix?? lol. Those guards were terrified of her! lol"

He may have been an elitist prick who had tried on more than one occasion to kill her and her friends, but he had looked damn fine while doing it. AGREED! *swoons*