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schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you have another story up. I've read all of your other stories and they are all really great. This story is turning out to be really good (not that that's a surprise coming from you). Can't wait for the next update.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG SG! This is your best work yet. Truly feel sorry for Lucius at this moment, Hermione is giving him a run for his money. Awesome in everyway. Please add more soon
person Niclaire
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Leaving it this way was truly devious of, you know? But I love your HG/LM fics, and this one seems to be even better than the others. And I must say that such a liberated version of Hermione appeals to me in a strange way. With great appreciation, and praying for a quick update - Niclaire.
person Nelly
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Yes! Simply love where your going with this and the way you get there. Excellent plot idea, very novel, and I love your portrayal of Hermione... and Lucius. I'm also ridiculously giddy to find you update so frequently. Thank you for putting a smile on my face with your chapters, I had a truly awful day.
person angeleye68
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, all hail Snape Goddess!! I have just read all 7 chapters and absolutely love this little adventure so far and two more adventure stories that will last all summer long -- I am very happy!

You have an incredible writing style and each chapter flows so smoothly into the next. And of course, you are writing about my favorite - Lucius. What is not to love about this man.. And yes, I like this Hermione, I think she is going to give Lucius a run for his money (so to speak). I also like the fact that Severus and Draco have already popped up in this story... There is just something about these 3 Slytherins that is too irresistible.

Lastly, I have a question for you -- about the whole thinking about sex thing for a man (the calculation) Did you by any chance get this from a movie (Simply Irresistible)? There is something similiar in the movie and I laughed when I saw the movie and then again when you had written something similiar.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Ah, an adventure to be savored in three parts. Excellent. Is the temple site in England or Wales or
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Lucius isn
person Tenar10r
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOO! Excellent!
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: If Hermione doesn
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: